When summer is busy packing its footsteps

When summer is busy packing
its footsteps
and drifting away with the drowsy heat,
I'm lying serenely
in the shade of a maple tree
like a fallen leaf,
casting a glance at the azure sky
and the carefree clouds.

It seems only yesterday~
I once rode on those open top buses
in the sky
across the Great Plains and many an ocean
to the end of the earth.
I've seen the world, and I'm tired
of traveling.

All I want to do now is wait quietly here
for the sunset glow
and say my last goodbye to the westering
old pal!

I Bloody Love Your Work !
Every time I see a Thread by you I have to Look and read it.

Your Work makes me sit and think,
I love working out the deepened meanings emotions and I always end up feeling great when i discover them.

Thanks and keep posting more !! :)

x

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Originally Posted by Skia

I Bloody Love Your Work !
Every time I see a Thread by you I have to Look and read it.

Your Work makes me sit and think,
I love working out the deepened meanings emotions and I always end up feeling great when i discover them.

Thanks and keep posting more !! :)

x

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Thanks, Skia, for your bloody love of my scribblings!
So, what deepened meanings and emotions do you get from this one?
I'm really curious!
If you're willing to tell me, I'll be blessed!

Regards,

This is one of your best, angli. I love the two opening lines - what a wonderful image. If this is one of your recent pieces then your craftsmanship is definitely improving.

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Originally Posted by hillwalker

This is one of your best, angli. I love the two opening lines - what a wonderful image. If this is one of your recent pieces then your craftsmanship is definitely improving.

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Thanks, Hillwalker, for the kind feedback!

I'm still learning from you and other great poets on this litnet!

Yes, I scribbled this one and the others I have posted here recently, for I don't think it's a good idea to translate others' work!
Though my scribblings are not good enough, yet they are really mine!

you paint a tranquil picture here and I want to bring a thermos and join you under the tree!

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Originally Posted by Delta40

you paint a tranquil picture here and I want to bring a thermos and join you under the tree!

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Thanks, Delta, for the most poetic and romantic idea!

The honor and pleasure are really mine
if you come joining me in the shade of a maple tree!
Let's enjoy the romance and beauty that autumn brings,
and forget about lonely blue sky!