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    poems on love, nostalgia and whatever...

    hi, here r some of my poems on love, nostalgia and whatever...

    cheers
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    I liked "I won't say" and "classroom notes" a lot! Thoughthe latter one did make me wonder at the plight of us poor teachers!
    I'm nobody, who are you?
    Are you nobody too?
    There's a pair of us, don't tell!
    They'd banish us, you know!

    How dreary to be somebody!

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    Open your shirt , I wanna see ur heart - is an excellent line!

    The first part of Wanna chat ? I really liked.

    You have really good titles on your poems, they make me want to read them. I always have problem finding good titles.
    "Man was made for joy and woe;
    And when this we rightly know
    Through the world we safely go" Blake

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    I personally don't want to write about love. Love is a term that gets thrown around way to much. I like writing about things i can relate to.

    I too like that line in particular.
    and classroom notes rocks socks
    "My body won't succumb to my heart and it's tearing me apart"

    "There is no point to democracy when ignorance is celebrated"

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    then comes a sparrow by the corridor

    and u know what, most of them r class room notes!!
    my girl friend maybe sitting in the class,
    totally engrossed in whatever is going on in the class, whatever mathematical notations
    the professor jots on the black-board
    and i'll be just on the other side, looking at her sometimes,
    in a dreamy world, and wondering why she isn’t eyeing at me even once.
    then comes a sparrow by the corridor, chatters something,
    picks up anything on the floor and flutter away.
    when the prof. gave away notes, I’ll be
    sitting, my head bent, and writing out my own ‘classroom notes’,,


    but phoenix_tears, how u say u cant relate to love?
    in my life i think love is the most finest thing u can relate to


    sindhu, thnx 4 the comments but so many times
    i've wondered if it's not better to wander thru
    the fairy land, of dreams n leaves n swiftly flowing
    streams rather than constrict myself to some y=mx+c


    and isagel, i've so many titles with me, titles
    without poems.. i donno wat to do with them, but
    i write it down somewhere sometimes and 4get it later,,

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    well

    take it from someone who has spent a lot of time among imaginary trees , leaves, and flowing streams. When you are in class, you damn well better pay attention. We all daydream, but it is important to discipline yourself to the task at hand. This is especially true of writers.
    Permit me to doubt.

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    Love is a waste of time, and in my experience, it always ends in heartache. The pain i've seen it cause is not worth the dust on my shoes.
    "My body won't succumb to my heart and it's tearing me apart"

    "There is no point to democracy when ignorance is celebrated"

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phoenix_Tears
    Love is a waste of time, and in my experience, it always ends in heartache. The pain i've seen it cause is not worth the dust on my shoes.
    Oh, How I agree! But have you found the way of stopping it from happening? If so,I WISH you would share the secret with me.
    I'm nobody, who are you?
    Are you nobody too?
    There's a pair of us, don't tell!
    They'd banish us, you know!

    How dreary to be somebody!

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    pain
    without pain
    love is incomplete

    well i understand
    when u say the disaster it can bring to ur life
    but life's like that, no?
    like sindhu said, u cant stop it from happening?


    some people cry cuz they are not in love
    some people cry cuz they are in love
    some people cry cuz they are not in love but in love
    some people cry cuz they are in love but not in love


    anyways you cry , no? is it?
    have you found a way to escape from itz vicious tentacles?


    if something which u so ardently follow so fervently crave for,
    is a waste of time,,

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    anyways you cry , no? is it?
    have you found a way to escape from itz vicious tentacles?
    Just, don't care. You'll happily tumble to your doom
    More problems, More poetry.

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