Half moon,
Brilliant stars,
The air is brisk.
Sweetheart's warm kiss.
A horse neighs.
Two lovers in the hay.
The coming of fall.
Cool love calls.
Half moon,
Brilliant stars,
The air is brisk.
Sweetheart's warm kiss.
A horse neighs.
Two lovers in the hay.
The coming of fall.
Cool love calls.
I Like that.
Very sweet,
When you're close to tears remember,
someday, it'll all be over...
"Words to cut your emotions with.
Words to make you feel worthless with" - Zoolane
Oh, my lost youth......... Thanks!
Dafydd Manton, A Legend In His Own Lunchtime!!www.dafydd-manton.co.uk
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your poem has such brevity but is very sweet
Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb
I simply love this piece, short but sweet!
It's a bit like Chinese poetry!
Try to live in harmony with people and nature
cool love calls? Well...that's not very exciting, is it?
What ever happened to hot sloppy love? -- the kind where you have to pull yourself off the floor and brush the hay off your backside before returning to work
^ Love doesn't have to be portrayed as hot and sexy and spicy, it can be portrayed as calm, sweet and sensual.Originally Posted by Abras
the kind where you have to pull yourself off the floor and brush the hay off your backside before returning to work
When you're close to tears remember,
someday, it'll all be over...
"Words to cut your emotions with.
Words to make you feel worthless with" - Zoolane
I'm no expert, I'm only 55, been around a little bit, but that sounds a bit more like lust. Not quite as satisfying and fulfilling. The poem is definitely a love poem, in the purest sense.cool love calls? Well...that's not very exciting, is it?
What ever happened to hot sloppy love? -- the kind where you have to pull yourself off the floor and brush the hay off your backside before returning to work
Dafydd Manton, A Legend In His Own Lunchtime!!
My Work Has Been Spread Over Many Fields!
no doubt about it....there are all sorts of love....cool love calls? Well...that's not very exciting, is it?
What ever happened to hot sloppy love? -- the kind where you have to pull yourself off the floor and brush the hay off your backside before returning to work
Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb
I Agree, I'm only 18, not been around as much, I know :P
But I agree with you definately.
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When you're close to tears remember,
someday, it'll all be over...
"Words to cut your emotions with.
Words to make you feel worthless with" - Zoolane
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