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    I'm dancing, anyone askin??

    For those who believe,
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    For those who do not,
    none will suffice.

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    what Daf, a savage sheep? Jer quick, close the door behind you!! We don't want any interruptions.

    I also brought in a '48 band

    "But do you really, seriously, Major Scobie," Dr. Sykes asked, "believe in hell?"
    "Oh, yes, I do."
    "In flames and torment?"
    "Perhaps not quite that. They tell us it may be a permanent sense of loss."
    "That sort of hell wouldn't worry me," Fellowes said.
    "Perhaps you've never lost anything of importance," Scobie said.

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    If you don't mind I'll sit this one out - it's the old war wound you know!! I'll just sit here with this bottle and wait........ Oh, by the way, the sheep's bleated its last.
    Dafydd Manton, A Legend In His Own Lunchtime!! www.dafydd-manton.co.uk

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    Sad about the sheep. nevermind

    Whats that I hear?? Glen, its you. I'm dancing. Bellboy, get me another screwdriver.

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    *Bellboy* Sorry, Sir, all we've got is this monkey wrench. We stole it from the monkey.
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    Quote Originally Posted by lallison View Post
    this is such
    a great poem
    who could imagine
    that writing simple
    sentimental sentences

    broken with line breaks
    and stanzas
    could result in
    a work of absolute genius
    such as this

    this is just as moving
    as when I woke this morning
    to my alarm clock beeping.

    And I feel the same degree of appreciation
    for you,
    But I got to work anyhow.
    Thanks for that.

    This is as wonderful as
    a greeting card
    and just as original.

    You have met our standards.
    Congratulations!
    lmao - Your poem is as breathtaking as my kitchen wall (minus the grease stains which do in fact form interesting shapes if you stare at them long enough!)
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    Dafydd Manton, A Legend In His Own Lunchtime!! www.dafydd-manton.co.uk

    My Work Has Been Spread Over Many Fields!

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    Oh, we are having another lovely thread here, based on the most touching expression of deep fondness for each other. These sentiments are quite undefinable

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    Quote Originally Posted by Delta40 View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by lallison View Post
    this is such
    a great poem
    who could imagine
    that writing simple
    sentimental sentences

    broken with line breaks
    and stanzas
    could result in
    a work of absolute genius
    such as this

    this is just as moving
    as when I woke this morning
    to my alarm clock beeping.

    And I feel the same degree of appreciation
    for you,
    But I got to work anyhow.
    Thanks for that.

    This is as wonderful as
    a greeting card
    and just as original.

    You have met our standards.
    Congratulations!

    lmao - Your poem is as breathtaking as my kitchen wall (minus the grease stains which do in fact form interesting shapes if you stare at them long enough!)

    Quote Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy View Post
    Im sure your poem above will win you many admirers on here Lall.
    I notice its untitled. May I suggest ' A lame wolf in sheep's clothing'?

    thanks for weighing in guys

    but that's precisely why I call my poems trashy, now someone actually has the gumption to say it openly. BUt at least I didn't copy anyone's lines

    Kudos to lallison.

    "But do you really, seriously, Major Scobie," Dr. Sykes asked, "believe in hell?"
    "Oh, yes, I do."
    "In flames and torment?"
    "Perhaps not quite that. They tell us it may be a permanent sense of loss."
    "That sort of hell wouldn't worry me," Fellowes said.
    "Perhaps you've never lost anything of importance," Scobie said.

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    He's not invited to our party. I'm now going to go and dance with ****. And I can't even dance. Yay!!
    Dafydd Manton, A Legend In His Own Lunchtime!! www.dafydd-manton.co.uk

    My Work Has Been Spread Over Many Fields!

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    would have been fine had it been said openly

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    Darn it, I missed the party... I hate that I need to sleep... I mean why can't I be awake all the time...

    And what's this I hear... Someone not happy about my ode to me by my special friend Haunted. In Haunted's words... Kudos to Lallison...

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    ah Mary. care for a dance. Im breakdancing on me own here

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    Jumps onto the floor and lands on her head...

    Ouch....

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    steady on. 'Nurse, nurse' . Blood on the dance floor. picks up unconscious Mary and slow dances so nobody notices.

    For those who believe,
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    For those who do not,
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