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    Quote Originally Posted by Beautifull View Post
    Very good explaniation Max, I understand completely what you're trying to say. The last two sentences really caught my attention. Thanks for giving me a full explaniation to work with.
    At your service

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    It has given me some more to think about. I may finish that poem off with your help, Maxey! As always, you're a big help! Just let me...think for a bit.
    Take your time

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    Yes. I understand what you're trying to say.
    Thanks

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    Quote Originally Posted by Beautifull View Post
    so it isn't perfected yet,but i couldn't sleep last night until i wrote it down,it stuck to me...

    Pitter Patter,Pitter Patter,
    softly against my window,
    while i lay my head to rest,
    Pitter Patter.

    Splish Splash,Splish Splash.
    lightly against the patio side,
    even while my pen descends to paper,
    Splish Splash.

    Drim Drum,Drim Drum,
    loudly against my roof,
    just as i cozy up on my couch,
    Drim Drum.

    Drip Drop, Drip Drop,
    falling from the sky,
    each drop,making a soft melody,
    soothing my soul,
    Drip drop.

    Pitter Patter,
    Splish Splash,
    Drim Drum,
    Drip Drop,
    coming together,
    to make a melody so sweet,
    it soothes all the pain.
    This poem from so long ago seems to repeat itself once again. I feel so peaceful, and the rain is just my favorite lullaby. It may be simple, but it never fails to lull me to a peaceful sleep.
    Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.

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    So I wrote ths a while back, and realized this is exactly the guy I'm looking for...
    I want a guy who stays when I tell him to go away
    I want a guy who still askes me what's wrong after I say it's nothing
    I want a guy who say's "I love you" when I say "I hate you".
    I want a guy who believes in romance.
    I want a guy who wants to be my friend before he wants to be my boyfriend
    I want a guy who'd rather be a gentleman than be cool
    I want a guy who calls me beautifull while looking into my eyes instead of looking at my body
    I want a guy who will stay on the phone when we still run out of things to say
    I want a guy who will be jealous if I even talk to another guy
    I want a guy who respects me for my character instead of how I look.
    I want a guy who makes me laugh
    I want a guy who if I married him, would wake me with a kiss in the morning, and hug me close every night.
    But most of all, I want a guy who says I love you every chance he can get, and really mean it.
    Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.

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    Wonderful specifications. Now, if you believe in this sort of thing, you have published it to the universe which, hopefully, will soon respond.

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    lol. Yessss. very true...Hear that world?
    Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.

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    Oh, Beautiful, if only I weren't spoken for............. (and 40 years older!!!!!) It's really not too much to ask, either. You'll find it!!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by dafydd manton View Post
    Oh, Beautiful, if only I weren't spoken for............. (and 40 years older!!!!!) It's really not too much to ask, either. You'll find it!!!
    I know. But did you know that for some men, that is too much for them? It drives me crazy, but I appreciate ya!
    Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.

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    I really hope you really find such a really perfect match and by no means would I like to discourage you, but maybe it would be more realistic to content yourself with just a few, or even one of such characteristics you aim at because meeting all of such high standards in just one person is rather... difficult these days IMHO, regardless of gender, people of today are not really concerned with the essence of their interactions with a potential darling. What you're describing is an over-humane person, like a flawless super-hubby, and in terms of so much humanity, I've seen most people lagging behind.

    Of course there's always the chance that I haven't seen enough, should we give a touch of optimism to my previous words

    However, I wish you the best of lucks in such a tremendous quest... you will certainly need it

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    Quote Originally Posted by Maximilianus View Post
    I really hope you really find such a really perfect match and by no means would I like to discourage you, but maybe it would be more realistic to content yourself with just a few, or even one of such characteristics you aim at because meeting all of such high standards in just one person is rather... difficult these days IMHO, regardless of gender, people of today are not really concerned with the essence of their interactions with a potential darling. What you're describing is an over-humane person, like a flawless super-hubby, and in terms of so much humanity, I've seen most people lagging behind.

    Of course there's always the chance that I haven't seen enough, should we give a touch of optimism to my previous words

    However, I wish you the best of lucks in such a tremendous quest... you will certainly need it
    yesss. It will be hard, but super hubby doesn't exist. Now, I know the perfect man for me does. These characteristics I named off aren't impossible. Quite the opposite. I wonder if this list made you reflect on yourself?
    Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Beautifull View Post
    I wonder if this list made you reflect on yourself?
    It made me reflect about 2 aspects:
    1. Mistakes I've made
    2. Mistakes people make


    By the way, I would very much appreciate the possibility of approaching a lady with the aforementioned qualities too

    How about that road trip?

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    Awesome road trip. I got to see dolphins in the ocean!!!!
    Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.

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    I want a guy who stays when I tell him to go away
    I want a guy who still askes me what's wrong after I say it's nothing
    I want a guy who say's "I love you" when I say "I hate you".
    I want a guy who believes in romance.
    I want a guy who wants to be my friend before he wants to be my boyfriend
    I want a guy who'd rather be a gentleman than be cool
    I want a guy who calls me beautifull while looking into my eyes instead of looking at my body
    I want a guy who will stay on the phone when we still run out of things to say
    I want a guy who will be jealous if I even talk to another guy
    I want a guy who respects me for my character instead of how I look.
    I want a guy who makes me laugh
    I want a guy who if I married him, would wake me with a kiss in the morning, and hug me close every night.
    But most of all, I want a guy who says I love you every chance he can get, and really mean it.
    beautiful Beautiful.
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    Quote Originally Posted by breathtest View Post
    beautiful Beautiful.
    You think so?
    Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.

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    I really do

    Its a nice way to express how you want to be loved.
    You should write that on a piece of paper and give it to every man you meet and then tell him to go away if he cant meet the criteria
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    Quote Originally Posted by Beautifull View Post
    Awesome road trip. I got to see dolphins in the ocean!!!!
    Maybe a jot about the dolphins could be appropriate

    Quote Originally Posted by breathtest View Post
    I really do

    Its a nice way to express how you want to be loved.
    You should write that on a piece of paper and give it to every man you meet and then tell him to go away if he cant meet the criteria
    Excellent idea, like a list of prerequisites to apply for the job as Beautifull's hubby

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