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  1. 07-29-2010, 08:12 AM #1
    Asphara
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  2. 07-29-2010, 08:27 AM #2
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    I couldn't understand most of the poem except for the last 6 lines. Please don't feel bad I am just 16 and a kid.
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    I dont fully understand this, but I understand what you were trying to do, and I like it, the last 2 stanzas stand out from the rest of the poem.
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