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    Brilliant.

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    Domestic Violins

    But another
    other than the other mother
    bruised my brother
    brother the bother
    of a bruised battered brother

    The coppers came over
    we all ran for cover
    some made it
    not mother nor brother
    I'm left here alone
    to make bail
    what a mother
    "Remember, we are all in this alone." - Lilly Tomlin

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    I think I may have failed at writing a bad poem...it's bad though, I guess...my judgement is impaired because I am tired. Here we go...

    Undercover Detective's View of Suspect Eating

    I watched her red lips
    move like caterpillars
    her cheeks bulging
    a piece of meat slipped
    out and fell to her
    plate
    she wiped her juicy mouth
    with a soiled napkin
    her throat bobbed
    My radio buzzed in my ear
    "do you have the suspect
    in view?"
    'Yes. She's eating a steak.'
    "you're watching the wrong
    lady."
    'Blond? 6 foot 3? I think not.'
    "Vegetarian."
    silence,
    I watch the right girls lips
    move like caterpillars
    a fork of greens lifted to
    her mouth...
    "O reason, reason, abstract phantom of the waking state, I had already expelled you from my dreams, now I have reached a point where those dreams are about to become fused with apparent realities: now there is only room here for myself. "
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    Quote Originally Posted by AdoreroDio View Post
    I think I may have failed at writing a bad poem...it's bad though, I guess...my judgement is impaired because I am tired. Here we go...

    Undercover Detective's View of Suspect Eating

    I watched her red lips
    move like caterpillars
    her cheeks bulging
    a piece of meat slipped
    out and fell to her
    plate
    she wiped her juicy mouth
    with a soiled napkin
    her throat bobbed
    My radio buzzed in my ear
    "do you have the suspect
    in view?"
    'Yes. She's eating a steak.'
    "you're watching the wrong
    lady."
    'Blond? 6 foot 3? I think not.'
    "Vegetarian."
    silence,
    I watch the right girls lips
    move like caterpillars
    a fork of greens lifted to
    her mouth...
    Oh, it's bad.
    You found the
    right thread,
    my poetically
    challenged friend.
    If I get funded,
    I should like to
    study your tics
    and assorted
    neuroses, if you
    are not averse.
    If you are a verse,
    I suggest that you
    write yourself down
    quickly, before you
    are gone.
    "Remember, we are all in this alone." - Lilly Tomlin

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    Organ Loft

    Organ loft full of pipes
    channelling
    the motorways of mice:
    full of wind
    flutes the size of knights
    joust with infinitely complex
    feasts of sound, unruly hymns,
    brothers to the wedlocked bins
    where pigeons piss and crap
    their guano commentaries.
    Spiders twist the ragged
    howls of hurricanes unbound
    and lost in SETI culture shock
    they just turn up their legs
    and drop.

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    Wonderful Hawk,
    My only criticism
    is that perhaps
    it is a tad too,
    how shall I put
    this delicately,
    good!(do not take
    offense)...peace...
    "Remember, we are all in this alone." - Lilly Tomlin

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    Fortnight in Soviet Union
    Hours sat in dimly lit bar.
    Sampling various potions
    Made in the USSR.

    Fortnight in Soviet Union
    Roll on the day when I learn.
    Ordered a Molotov Cocktail.
    Now, I've got shocking Heartburn.
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    O TANNENBAUM

    Fairy on thy evergreen
    Placed on high so thou'll be seen!
    Symbol of a peace so fine
    Perched upon they lofty pine.
    Eleven months for thee we've longed
    Thy golden wings, thy silver wand.
    At last arrives December's fate
    And yet I sense that thou could'st wait.
    It can't be pleasant, ergo sum,
    With half a fir tree up yer bum!
    Last edited by dafydd manton; 07-28-2010 at 10:51 AM.
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    Quote Originally Posted by hack View Post
    Wonderful Hawk,
    My only criticism
    is that perhaps
    it is a tad too,
    how shall I put
    this delicately,
    good!(do not take
    offense)...peace...
    Oh, hack, I do hope you're joking

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    All the right boxes have been ticked.
    Sorry, Hawk, you've just been nicked!
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    Curses, foiled again.

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    What can I say?
    when all I think about
    is drooling all over you,
    putting you to my lips
    and then chomping you down,
    you beautiful chocolate bar
    known as Galaxy!
    When you're close to tears remember,
    someday, it'll all be over...


    "Words to cut your emotions with.
    Words to make you feel worthless with
    " - Zoolane


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    Not your thoughts, but your dear Pa's
    Just as well he likes his Mars.
    I thought of one that rhymes with Snickers

    But I am a coward!
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    Haha Nice Daf!

    Areo is also a sexy peice,
    so is Lion bar and the Milkyway,
    but Bounty makes me Blah!
    When you're close to tears remember,
    someday, it'll all be over...


    "Words to cut your emotions with.
    Words to make you feel worthless with
    " - Zoolane


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