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    The Devil's Game

    the swift flick of a nicotine stained
    fingertip sent the chip spinning
    suspended momentarily in a shaft of
    moonlight streaming through the solitary
    high window and the players were poised
    their poker faces frozen over the flesh
    below and the cold which enfolded the
    old green baise table was palpable...

    the devil happily took the roll of dealer
    and everyone figured that the devil was
    naturally a cheater so evened their odds
    accordingly but the devil was playing them
    all for fools, you see, he knew how they
    would react so in fact it was favourable
    to leave the deck unstacked so the devil
    dealt with his honour for once in tact

    there were four royal families at war
    in the pack the king and jack of hearts
    launched the first attack in a betting battle
    that went on long into the night
    face up on the table was the devil's favourite
    card the ace of spades drawn against the tribe
    of bleeding hearts calling war from the
    fortress of chips which they guarded

    the devil played an honest game that evening
    even when big jack and little jim upped the ante
    and started cheating him he continued playing
    the cards he was dealt and knew he didn't seem
    like his old wicked self to the rest of the players
    and they were phased by his astonishing lack
    or straight flushes and dubious five-of-a-kinds
    the devil played cards with their money
    but that night
    he really just wanted to **** with their minds

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    This is really clever Sampson there is some great wit here and I love it. Well done!

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    Very good, Samp, and what a skillful card player the devil is, always the winner...
    Enjoyed a lot while reading also between the lines! Bar.

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    I love the opening verse; it paints a vivid picture of a sleazy poker den and sets the scene brilliantly.
    "How vain it is to sit down to write when you have not stood up to live."

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    I too was intrigued by the whole of this and as a former, avid but none too skillful poker player, I schemed at what I might do to outsmart an honest devil! Interesting conundrum. Reminded me of that line from the end of "The Usual Suspects" where Keyser Soce (sp?) says something like "The devil never played a better trick than when he convinced us he doesn't exist!"

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    cheers guys... poker is a wonderful subject for poetry, don't you all think? people always have a lot of the imagery in their heads, so it allows a poet to play on that instead of focusing on the build up of a scenario, I reckon...

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