Living a life of hell
yet not even an urge to yell
even when things fall
this time, it's giving it all
just to keep a smile on the face,
laugh if it's the case,
And yet, the heart hurts,
staying on the alert
not giving in for anything
nothing willl make the heart sing
because pain covers everything...
Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.
It's as though the person who wrote it was thinking about my condition, or a condition similar to mine. I wouldn't have been able to put it in better words. Thanks for unwittingly reading my mind
really? I didn't know...I guess we're in similar situations thenOriginally Posted by Maximilianus
It's as though the person who wrote it was thinking about my condition, or a condition similar to mine. I wouldn't have been able to put it in better words. Thanks for unwittingly reading my mind
Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.
It seems we are.really? I didn't know...I guess we're in similar situations then
Are you okay?
Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.
I survived Saturday, which was a very bad day at the end of a very bad week. I think I can move on.
Yikes. Saturday is my favorite day...Aw you were sad in Saturday? Well, I hope Sunday was a better day for you.
I wish you happiness
...
I wonder if my powers are working right now! I'm working really hard on it!
Well, if that didn't work, piggy says hi!
Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.
It works!
Yaya! I did it!
Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.
Beautiful, you stirred the moment and this proves now you have the craft to write poetry most of us are not endowed with. Poetry must pop up effortlessly, a jot down; to rephrase your own terms and you had the gift the one that is rare in this world of machinery minds. You can transport your reader to the serenity of mountains that make us forget this rat race for a while and get drunk in a dreamy world that snares us or enchants into a world that is half real
“Those who seek to satisfy the mind of man by hampering it with ceremonies and music and affecting charity and devotion have lost their original nature””
“If water derives lucidity from stillness, how much more the faculties of the mind! The mind of the sage, being in repose, becomes the mirror of the universe, the speculum of all creation.
Thank you so much. That means a lot, blaze. I really appreciate your complement. And I'm glad I have someone like you wh always is willing to read my works.
Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.
Under the ray that sun transpires
bringing in all that love desires
what do we say?
Do we do what the heart may?
Living for the moment
Acknowledging all that love sent
And yet, still so lonely
only able to see
no touch, no smell of perfume
no sound, no passion to consume
how to live through a life full of pain?
Only by the people we call friend.
Last edited by Beautifull; 07-07-2010 at 07:18 PM.
Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.
At times when we question our motives and life-paths, it's friends and loved ones who pull us through...
Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.
Bright pieces, Beaut. Blaze is quite right in his definition of your talent, I agree
Thank you.Bright pieces, Beaut. Blaze is quite right in his definition of your talent, I agree
Find your dream and stick with it...or your life will have slipped past in a whisper with you still on the bottom.
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