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    You are my Woman

    flaws
    still I owe you a debt
    relation a worthy gift
    let us look into the rift
    your perfection makes you a woman

    how many times I can run away
    reason not lovelier than thee
    knowledge not loftier than thee
    penetrating you not a diversion
    you rise-a higher, culminating stage

    your eyes move,
    I am freaked out
    what is so immoral
    in my longing for your hips
    or in my kiss lingering on your lips

    searching the truth
    behind throttled dreams,
    life’s celebrations: dizzy zeniths
    there heave in torridity
    mute memories

    your breasts
    pristine peaks of purity
    eternal realm of resplendent
    unresolved vicissitudes of solace
    bringing life to me and me to life

    I probe an infinitude
    the silence of crescent
    the exile of your existence
    between the night and the morning
    love interferes with depths

    the wind outside wants to hear
    what transpires inside
    within the boundaries of night
    what reveals what
    emerges this poem.

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    There is undoubted ardour in this, but it is a mistake to use the archaic "thee" alongside the more contemporary "you" and the colloquial "freak out".

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    Gee, I just got slapped on the write for writing this way too. But Prince is right.

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    Poems by K K Srivastava

    Waves of illusions;
    ocean of their vacuum
    things are so clean
    you need no purity,
    devils- our strength
    helping us meditate
    our words of wisdom
    never fall on the ground.
    What allures us—
    we don’t know
    the unified entity
    standing as a separate life
    engulfed by unfamiliar routes,
    an ever-interrupted reality
    of hopes/despair stand erect.

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    Life

    Out
    from where
    and for what
    our deserted procession begins.

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    Eyes Do not cheat

    There are citadels
    enveloped in blurred sight
    someone is waiting for us
    sometimes-walking up and down
    that someone have no legs
    it has unhurdled existence
    it is indestructible
    it is invisible
    it pulsates within us-no sounds
    we wander haphazardly
    since time immemorial
    to seam our ashen anxieties
    but is it true our eyes have
    cheated us.

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    In Delirium

    Are we in delirium?
    Carl Jung tells us yes.
    In delirium creators create:
    they write poems; short or long
    imprisoning the entire
    in the grip of tiny partials
    to salvage the armless poet
    from the inexplicable illusions.
    On a plain sheet of paper
    spreads the entire universe
    what you perceive as movement
    I perceive as void and still
    vexations surround us, seize us
    we are afraid of the fear of fire.

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    Madness in Poetry

    When you face life
    you face death too
    you realize the war of
    instincts within
    and you cherish nocturnal glee
    you feel the pulse of madness
    madness is no enemy of intelligence
    or of conscience: madness
    makes you perfect.
    Look at Elizabeth Bishop
    look at Sulvia Plaith,
    or Eliot or Pound
    or Poe or one of consequence
    and you know what good poetry
    is all about.
    It are ruminations: threads
    in deep thoughts
    evolved there; during recapitulation
    in mental asylum.

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    A Night Party

    Let us enter another world,
    every time we wake up to a
    new reality
    we don’t know what is happening
    there you have wild music,
    silent agitation, sheepish laughter
    curves and shapes dancing violently
    a strange, hostile, antagonistic crowd
    play with their destiny.
    They have time and space frozen
    inside them
    no dearth of symbols filling emptiness
    the show goes on;
    it must move
    the disorderly images integrate
    all of us: sum up all of us.



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    Thoughts about the Sunset

    The sea, with a heavenly face, and kissed by the stars,
    With haunting conches in unpriced trimmings
    In their depths, with a golden dawn,
    Flourished by the sun of the combed sunset.
    How amazed am I, o you sea, by your holy quietness,
    That way, as with erotic joy, affectionately, you caress the pebbles
    With an erotic pleasure you are tossed without hurry
    And you caress your dress of blue color in a heady way!
    And the sober people like emeralds are fragmented,
    scattering hither and thither
    And the waves get fragmented crowned full of effervescence,
    Your breasts, as they tear, they get struck by the lighting,
    The mystery is great and unexplained to me.
    How do you restrain yourself, O Sea, billowing wildly?
    How you don’t cross the boundary,
    God has determined?
    Ah, were it possible, were I capable,
    My anger not burst out in East and West!
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    Note: To select nine best poems out of seventy for an international event at Albania, I was nominated to head a jury with Shri Aju Mukhopadhya, a well known poet and Shri Nibir Ghosh, Professor of English Literature, Agra University as members. The above one was the best we selected and recommended to the organizers. As it happens name/place of the writer are not informed to the jury. Readers may enjoy the poem.

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    Look, you always pop on here, and post poems, and I always post the link to the other forums. By now you aught to know that "Read before posting" means read before posting, and you don't need people to spell out that this isn't the personal poetry section.

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    Well I find this Poem absolutely stunning, very well constructed, a great pleasure to see this KK...

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    This is truly fascinating, I love the Imagery, depth is stunning, something for me to give analysis! Well done...So glad that I have had the chance to read this. Sublime work

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    Other than the previous comments...

    Personally I believe this is Beautiful work....:0

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    I agree I think people on these threads genuinely enjoy poetry and even if a personal poem is placed in a different section, it should still be enjoyed and respected. After all, the sunset heading was interesting enough for you to click on to open the thread in the first place so why not just take a few more moments of your time to enjoy the "thoughts about the sunset"!
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