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    A voluptuous love song

    I always feel and hear
    This fascinating song
    Passionate and perfumed
    Of your voluptuous flesh
    Amorous and tender
    Wander so slowly

    Between my heartbeats
    And my diaphanous dreams
    Your silky smooth breath
    Deep and warm softly whispers

    Through your sweet words of love
    And your hesitant, timid kisses
    Lingering still on the misty lips
    Of my evanescent, secret dreams

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    oooohh that's heavy and sweet..like a southern summer's night .. I like it
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    So romantic and sensual! bravo!

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    Make me want to crawl into bed with a good trash novel. Please don't take me remark as a reflection on your poem, it is not trashy in the least, just voluptuous.

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    @ inbetween

    @ Bar22do

    @ jersea

    Thanks a lot for your pleasant and warm comments.

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