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    Question Please help in analysis poem

    I think this poem is about a father and son relationship and also he telling us that he had fun in the flying trip, but his father didn't cause he went the right ways instead of enjoying the flying experience. please let me know if i'm right.thank you





    Icarus by Christine Hemp



    It was his idea, this flying thing.
    We collected feathers at night, stuffing
    our pockets with mourning dove down. By day,
    we'd weave and glue them with the wax
    I stole after we'd shooed the bees away.

    Oh, how it felt, finally, to blow off Crete
    leaving a labyrinth of dead-ends:
    my clumsiness with figures, father's calm
    impatience, cool logic, interminable devising.
    The sea wind touched my face like balm.

    He thought I'd tag along as usual,
    in the wake of his careful scheme
    bound by the string connecting father and son,
    invisible thread I tried for years to untie.
    I ached to be a good-for-something on my own.

    I didn't know I'd get drunk with the heat,
    flying high, too much a son to return.
    Poor Daedelus, his mouth an O below,
    his hands outstretched to catch the rain
    of wax. He still doesn't know.

    My wings fell, yes - I saw him hover
    over the tiny splash - but by then I'd been
    swallowed into love's eye, the light I've come to see
    as home, drowning in the yes, this swirling
    white-hot where night will never find me.

    And now when my father wakes
    each morning, his bones still sore
    from his one-time flight, his confidence undone
    because the master plan fell through,
    he rises to a light he never knew, his son.
    Last edited by bebemala; 12-07-2009 at 08:02 PM.

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