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  1. 11-25-2009, 04:10 PM #1
    haymanali
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    Your shy lips

    I dream of your embrace
    Under the rosy shadow
    Of your scarlet shy lips
    Brushing my heartbeat
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  2. 11-26-2009, 12:27 AM #2
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    touching image of a kiss. i like the scarlet and shyness... the heartbeat is a great ending.
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  3. 11-28-2009, 07:57 PM #3
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    Cogs, thanks for your pleasant appreciation.
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  4. 11-28-2009, 08:52 PM #4
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    Very nicely written. I certainly enjoyed it. It captured the beauty and personal-ness of a kiss.
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  5. 12-03-2009, 05:20 PM #5
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    Thanks for your nice comment.
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