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    patience

    out of boggling propeller
    blades that whip
    everything in their path

    rise above what vexes
    to see the whole map
    as the floating vane
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    You just put me on the door guns of a rising gunship.
    I don't know that I should thank you, but, gingerly I will.
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    Its odd but I thought about a lawnmower and the intricate world it destroys in its path!
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    those are excellent interpretations, worthy of their own poems... i thought about the one blade i see, in a whirling propeller, that goes much slower, as in an optical illusion.

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    ... or, a meteorologist (placed above what vexes) waiting that that large dust devil collapse...

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