It took less than an Instant
in God’s Mind.
Worlds appeared to Him :
cohesion,
fusion,
evolution,
even my verse;
he saw how everything dies,
stars and Man.
Oh, Man! He sighed
and resumed Nothingness.
It took less than an Instant
in God’s Mind.
Worlds appeared to Him :
cohesion,
fusion,
evolution,
even my verse;
he saw how everything dies,
stars and Man.
Oh, Man! He sighed
and resumed Nothingness.
Last edited by Bar22do; 12-01-2009 at 03:45 AM.
WOW is all I have to say. This is remarkable, a brief glimpse into the realm of one creator, the breath, the sigh, the memory!
You did a great job with this
"real
loneliness
is not
necessarily
limited to
when
you are
alone"
-C. Bukowski
LOL - I wouldn't presume 'Nothingness', but that's just me.(Up until then you had me.)
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
humorous; every poem has to end... wish we could do this before writing.
Thank you all: Paper! your valuable insight comforted me; Cogs, I admire your overt dislike or it! Stately: did you mean to write "presume" or "resume" (one letter more and the whole comment sounds different)??? (I called NON BEING - NOTHINGNESS), and am happy you liked the rest...
Presume to resume, evolution proceeds by transcription errors,
perhaps we are all a slight mistake.
"Remember, we are all in this alone." - Lilly Tomlin
ashes to ashes... I like this poem very much!
Hack - we ARE, at least in our illusion, whether mistake or not!
Sophie! - you warmed up my heart!
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