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[sc9108]

I'm thinking up a new idea for a short film.

Its about a man who is receiving anonymous phonocalls, from someone who says they're his dead brother.

Through the story you follow his life, and understand more about how his brother died. He receives a ring that belonged to his brother, and from then on he starts to lose control.

You start to understand he might have had something to do with his death. And maybe this is from someone who knows the truth.

Any feedback ?

[glover7]

I'm thinking up a new idea for a short film.

Its about a man who is receiving anonymous phonocalls, from someone who says they're his dead brother.

Through the story you follow his life, and understand more about how his brother died. He receives a ring that belonged to his brother, and from then on he starts to lose control.

You start to understand he might have had something to do with his death. And maybe this is from someone who knows the truth.

Any feedback ?

I think it's fine, but it's just an outline. Just do it. The more you talk about a project, the less you actually work on it.

[sc9108]

I think it's fine, but it's just an outline. Just do it. The more you talk about a project, the less you actually work on it.

Thats so true

Yeah I started putting the beginning together yesterday. And I've thought up a few more scenes, its not a ''nice'' story and I'm writing it with that in mind.

Hopefully it'll go well ! Thanks for replying

[glover7]

Thats so true

Yeah I started putting the beginning together yesterday. And I've thought up a few more scenes, its not a ''nice'' story and I'm writing it with that in mind.

Hopefully it'll go well ! Thanks for replying

Good luck!