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    Notebook

    One day, walking, I found a notebook
    Tattered and filthy it was plastered to the sidewalk
    On a whim I pried it from the cement
    Sitting down, the curb digging into my bones
    I turned crusty pages, thick with dried rain
    It was filled with scribbles and scrawling
    Then I came across a poem
    Nearly indecipherable, but still there
    I paused a breath, then turned
    Quickly home with long steps
    Until I reached the drive, then up the incline
    To the big, green trash can
    Where I buried the notebook under black bags
    And sticky, stinking grime
    I walked into the house to wash my hands
    Burning in my denim pocket was a poem
    That I had no right to have

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    ha, you had me thinking you trashed it all. so ironic that such a revered poem should have such an ignominious history; then, separated from what didn't belong, like a sculpture. wow, this is really how poetry, discarded by us, probably touches off another's inspiration.

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    A really touching poem.
    I will also like to appreciate cogs' comment on it, seems to describe the whole scenery so well.
    I sang of leaves, of leaves of gold, and leaves of gold there grew.

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    very vivid picture of how poetry that we love seems so intensely powerfully ours.
    "The important thing is not to stop questioning. Curiosity has its' own reason for existing." ~ Albert Einstein
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