You make the winter seem like spring.
You make troubled seas calm.
You are the peace within my soul.
You are my warmth when the sky grows cold.
Your heart is my pillow in the night.
Your arms enfold me until early light.
Your breathing is music to my ears.
Thank you darling for oceans of love all these years.
Beautiful.
If I may be so bold as to suggest:
You make the winter seem like spring.
You calm my troubled seas.
You are the peace within my soul.
My warmth when the sky grows cold.
Your heart my pillow in the night.
Your arms enfold me until early light.
Your breath music to my ears.
Thank you darling for oceans of love all these years.
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 11-21-2009 at 06:40 AM. Reason: further reflection
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
I like Tailor's suggestions. Hope I am not overstepping any bounds.
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