Results 1 to 8 of 8

Thread: Crusty Men Writing.

  1. #1
    laudator temporis acti andave_ya's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2007
    Location
    At the nearest library
    Posts
    2,489
    Blog Entries
    157

    Crusty Men Writing.

    I'll take anything.
    I don't want to work on school
    but rather listen:

    Crusty men writing
    of ponds and trees and men who
    ebb and eddy with

    The sands of time, the
    noise and clangor of Progress,
    but no deep silent hush.

    Be still and know God.
    Be still and know I am God.
    I am waiting, Child!

    Words, tears, the music
    of walking with God in the
    fullness of His Love

    Combined with papers,
    reading, queer thinking, TIME
    piles in on me and

    I am overwhelmed.
    I am changed from the
    Selfish introvert

    That I once was. Now
    I better understand Time
    And know that I am

    Truly a Child. And,
    From the word-hoards in my mind:
    Love, Joy, Hope, Grace, Strength.
    "The time has come," the Walrus said,
    "To talk of many things:
    Of shoes--and ships--and sealing-wax--
    Of cabbages--and kings--
    And why the sea is boiling hot--
    And whether pigs have wings."

  2. #2
    Registered User Delta40's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Fremantle Western Australia
    Posts
    9,903
    Blog Entries
    62
    I don't know but reading this I felt I was given the full circle from childhood to old age and back again with exhilarating effect

  3. #3
    Registered User cogs's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2007
    Location
    america
    Posts
    453
    there's experience in this poem. it's very hard to be still.

  4. #4
    Vincit Qui Se Vincit Virgil's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2005
    Location
    New York
    Posts
    20,354
    Blog Entries
    248
    Andy, I didn't know you wrote poetry. This is outstanding.
    Crusty men writing
    of ponds and trees and men who
    ebb and eddy with

    The sands of time, the
    noise and clangor of Progress,
    but no deep silent hush.
    Outstanding!! Though I squirm a little with "the sands of time" (cliche you know) but it fits so well. That crusty men writng image is so good. (Actually come to think of it, that's the image on top of my blog. You didn't have me in mind, did you? )

    LET THERE BE LIGHT

    "Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena

    My literature blog: http://ashesfromburntroses.blogspot.com/

  5. #5
    chercheur ~Sophia~'s Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Location
    Montmartre, Paris
    Posts
    713
    Blog Entries
    23
    It works for crusty women too! Very good.

  6. #6
    Inexplicably Undiscovered
    Join Date
    Jun 2007
    Location
    next door to the lady in the vinegar bottle
    Posts
    5,089
    Blog Entries
    72
    The "Crusty old men" meaning the poets and writer whose works the speaker studies in school? Hmmm. Maybe this piece has the same theme as the Wordsworth poem that begins, "Up, up and
    quit thy books."

  7. #7
    All are at the crossroads qimissung's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Location
    Lost in the bell's curve
    Posts
    5,123
    Blog Entries
    66
    "Crusty men writing of ponds and treesand men who ebb and eddy with"-that's my favorite line. What a lovely reflection. It reminds me of the verse in the Bible, Ecclesiastes 3, "To everything there is a season, and a time to every purpose under the heaven: A time to be born, and a time to die..."
    "The important thing is not to stop questioning. Curiosity has its' own reason for existing." ~ Albert Einstein
    "Remember, no matter where you go, there you are." Buckaroo Bonzai
    "Some people say I done alright for a girl." Melanie Safka

  8. #8
    feathers firefangled's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2007
    Location
    Florida near Tampa Bay
    Posts
    3,015
    The thought that went into this poem is probably the best of all lessons. Thanks for sharing this.

Similar Threads

  1. Thinking About My Autobiography
    By Ron Price in forum General Writing
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 07-18-2010, 09:06 AM
  2. What makes good writing?
    By Drkshadow03 in forum General Literature
    Replies: 109
    Last Post: 09-18-2009, 10:19 PM
  3. Please Check my Essay
    By YumzxA1 in forum General Writing
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: 12-05-2008, 02:22 AM

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •