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  1. #1
    the brown writer
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    poems and songs

    in my country of ancestry, which is pakistan, there are forms of poetry which as spoken (or sang) to music.

    do you feel that any songs from where u come from have a poetic tendency?
    if u do, it'd be nice if you could post lyrics . i'll start.

    If you want to do something,
    then sketch out your pitiful dream
    If you want to do something,
    then sketch out your dream
    with badly lit, but pleasant love

    “You don’t have to pretend, not being very cool suits you well”

    The more effort we put into it,
    the more fruitless our journey is
    Our hands and feet fly everywhere
    like we’re in an elementary school parade
    Living life, isn’t it great?
    So being laughed at by people definitely feels alright

    The real me is shut away in the depths of my heart
    36/5 human,
    to put it plainly now, we don’t stop
    But I’m still acting tough,
    I’m still putting up a barrier
    I’m fighting with the pain

    Times are tough,
    I wish I could say thats how I feel
    We’re a couple of laughing cowards, acting tough
    Even though I’m lonely,
    I’m pretending to be just fine
    In order to protect myself,
    who feels like he’s about to crumble

    It shouldn’t be only me that feels these feelings
    of having no place to turn to
    I’m carrying with me
    This rootless loneliness…

    I’m indifferent to the pain of others
    When I’m really being myself, I get insecure
    I hate people, and I think only of being unhappy
    I whine about the things that I’m deprived of
    I scream and cry like a 3 year old kid
    I’m sitting and waiting for my afternoon snack,
    called love

    Not giving in to the reflection in the asphalt
    Walking with my own feet,
    I looked at people, and thought
    If I could move,
    if there was a place I wanted to head to
    Then I would walk there with my own feet

    There were nights when
    I wasn’t sure if I’d be able to
    Get my real smile back again
    Supported by the warmth of the people that I love
    I thought that maybe I should try to believe,
    one more time

    Times are tough,
    I wish I could say that’s how I feel
    We’re a couple of laughing cowards, acting tough
    Even though I’m lonely,
    I’m pretending to be just fine
    In order to protect myself,
    who feels like he’s about to crumble, but

    My mistakes and scars, being perplexed
    and the days when I was about to cry
    They’re all proof that I lived my life, as myself
    If you want to do something, then from now on
    Sketch out your pitiful dream,
    with more strength than anyone else
    Readying your explanation, and holding your head high
    without hesitation
    Keep on singing about a person called yourself

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    Cra**y stuff that follows on:

    'The Stalker'

    She stares menacingly...
    With no care whatsoever...

    He cringes trying not to notice...
    No remorse, she continues....

    Eyes, fixated piercing...
    On His every move....

    He's invaded.....
    She's aroused....

    He's raped....
    She's on Cloud 9...

    He forgives.....
    She dissects him....

    Judges him...
    Follows him....

    He forgives....
    He knows....

    She knows where he lives....
    His home, His Life under scrutiny.....

    He's ALWAYS KNOWN!
    She's a reporter....
    He's a public figure....

    I will pursue you......
    she admits.....
    Like MEAT, I will CHEW you.....
    Spit YOU OUT.....with VENOM,
    Until, of course, my next victim....

    So, WATCH OUT!
    There's a STALKER about!

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    More cra**y stuff...

    'Separated, Together, Forever'

    Commitment of just being.....
    Together....
    Not seeing.....

    The pretence...
    Their dutiful roles....
    Not fulfilling, anything, or anyone...

    The secrets....
    Their worlds....
    Separated....

    Entwined.....
    For the Play, Act Part 10,
    Everyone fooled.....

    The 2 main characters.....
    In full show.....
    The theatre....echoes

    With the roar of applause...
    From every corner....
    The only 2 biggest fools....

    Are....the main characters!
    Wasting away....
    No sacrifices.....

    No sacrifices....


    Really crazy stuff, off the top of my head....

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