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    Lady Moon

    Lady Moon

    Your cold body
    enthroned above
    distant sphere
    watching in
    retracted silence
    still, even in your
    movements.

    Ascending-
    descending
    wrapt within
    skye blanket
    a lone single
    empty socket.

    Pulse:
    through my blood
    mutely
    you whisper
    and laugh
    in the back of
    my skull.

    So alone
    your beauty
    enshrined
    your immortal death
    undenied;
    born again
    only unto the
    night!

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    when i read, i am inspired to write more. the skull reference was like the moon, and appropriate. the born again was good, as the moon rises. two thoughts i had: that the laughing may have a reason; and that the moon tries to stay aloof, but the sun reveals the lady's beauty.

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    Thank you very much for your insightful comments, and I am glad it could be an inspiration.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    This illustrative poem is startlingly touching; some staggering images have added splendor to the poem

    “Those who seek to satisfy the mind of man by hampering it with ceremonies and music and affecting charity and devotion have lost their original nature””

    “If water derives lucidity from stillness, how much more the faculties of the mind! The mind of the sage, being in repose, becomes the mirror of the universe, the speculum of all creation.

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    *bows* Thank you very much

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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