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    The Lanes of Warwickshire

    The Lanes of Warwickshire

    Damson Lane Oh! Damson Lane
    Shall I ever walk again?
    In the lanes of Warwickshire
    Pluck the berries purple tongued
    Where I walked when I was young
    In the lanes of Warwickshire
    When the bluebells stained the eye
    In the shade as I strolled by
    Past the musk rose of delight
    Where Titania dreamt at night
    In the lanes of Warwickshire
    Nodding where the violet shows
    Past the bank where wild thyme blows
    And the honeysuckle grows
    In the lanes of Warwickshire
    Where the river ran like wine
    Over hung with eglantine
    Still the stars from heaven shine
    O’er the lanes of Warwickshire

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    What a visual gem with a hint of nostalgic romance.

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    Beautiful.

    I was curious so I wiki'd Warwickshire to get a further perspective on the locale and history (I'm first generation removed from England on one side of the family [post-Shakespearean era during the the reign of Charles I (1625—1642) on the other]

    I was awestruck by this passage:

    "When the bluebells stained the eye
    In the shade as I strolled by
    Past the musk rose of delight
    Where Titania dreamt at night"


    Thank you for sharing.
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    For what I assume you were trying to achieve, this is very well done. The music in it is maintained without a forced rhyme and the nostalgia of it is touching and beautiful. The style is very consistent.

    I enjoyed reading it.

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