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    Exclamation Drunken Clouds

    Drunken Clouds

    by mazHur

    On the face of the Truth
    listen to what my friend says:
    gravity doesn't exist,
    that the Universe only sucks.
    To his point of view
    I may agree in terms of science;
    heavy particles fall down
    lighter fines whiz up
    Crystal wine may evaporate
    and turn into drunken clouds
    leaving the coarse lees behind;
    when the end comes near
    the feathery-light soul
    flutters to take a leap
    into the sky
    leaving the dense body behind
    until it rots and turns into dust
    and is finally sucked into the Unknown!
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    When asked how World War III would be fought, Einstein replied that he didn't know. But he knew how World War IV would be fought: With sticks and stones.
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    All are at the crossroads qimissung's Avatar
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    I love it!!!! "Crystal wine may evaporate and turn into drunken clouds..." What a great line!
    "The important thing is not to stop questioning. Curiosity has its' own reason for existing." ~ Albert Einstein
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    You are good at making scientific and technological words into a poem.

    “Those who seek to satisfy the mind of man by hampering it with ceremonies and music and affecting charity and devotion have lost their original nature””

    “If water derives lucidity from stillness, how much more the faculties of the mind! The mind of the sage, being in repose, becomes the mirror of the universe, the speculum of all creation.

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