
Originally Posted by
Clockman
I, like some of you apparently, have also had problems with Gatsby. I had read the book many years ago in college and did not see in it the greatness that seems to be the generally accepted opinion of the book. Recently, I reread the book, then discussed it with some teacher and professor friends, then reread it again. My opinion remains the same.
Gatsby certainly contains some moments of beautiful and moving poetry. But the problems become apparent when the book is viewed with some distance, as a whole. In my opinion, Gatsby lacks essential structural and thematic unity.
Fitzgerald perhaps set out to develop more, and more disparate, thematic foci than the book was capable of sustaining. Toward the end of the book, these problems become especially apparent. If only Gatsby were really just about the shallowness of the American Dream, as lovers of the book always point to. Fitzgerald, very near the end of the book, slides into a rambling and somewhat disorganized philosophizing about Easterners versus Westerners (Midwesterners to us today), proposes this conflict as the possible cause of the inevitable tragic result of the story, as Westerners Tom, Daisy and Gatsby attempt to live the life of the East. The book has not been about this. There is no thematic foundation for this entire section.
I find numerous other structural problems with Gatsby but will only mention one more, and that is, unfortunately, the ending. Fitzgerald lapses into a rant about America, the first Europeans to lay eyes on it, the "swimming upstream" quality of reaching for the American dream. The section has, at once, the quality of a disorganized stream-of-consciousness ramble, and an attempt to tie together and wrap up the multiple themes which, I suspect, Fitzgerald knew were hanging like loose threads.
I know that much of what I have just written will be unpalatable to Gatsby lovers, but it is, of course, merely my opinion.
I must add, however, that I find it highly unscholarly to write off any criticism of Gatsby (or any book) simply to youth, inexperience and iconoclasm. The fresh and independent perspectives of youth are one of the forces that move literary criticism and appreciation forward. The notion that experience and maturity consists of uncritically adopting the views of the "older and more erudite" would stop literary and scientific progress dead in its tracks. And, by the way, I am in my sixties.