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    Now I know why Eros,

    Of all the progeny of
    Earth and Heaven, has
    been most dearly loved

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    She was dressed well:

    Her feet were hidden
    under embroidered
    sandal straps--fine
    handwork from Asia

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dark Muse View Post
    If you will come

    I shall put out
    new pillows for
    you to rest on
    I think I'm going to steal these for some song lyrics.
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    Dead shalt thou lie; and nought
    Be told of thee or thought,
    For thou hast plucked not of the muses' tree:
    And even in Hades' halls
    Amidst thy fellow-thralls
    No friendly shade thy shade shall company!

    Translated by Thomas Hardy.

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    But you, monkey face

    Atthis, I loved you
    long ago while you
    still seemed to me a
    small ungracious child

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    I was proud of you, too

    In skill I think
    you need never
    bow to any girl

    not one who may
    see the sunlight
    in time to come

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    After all this

    Atthis, you hate
    even the thought

    of me. You dart
    off to Andromeda

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    I just love this one!

    With his venom

    Irresistible
    and bittersweet

    that loosner
    of limbs, Love

    reptile-like
    srikes me down.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    Afraid of losing you

    I ran fluttering
    like a little girl
    after her mother

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    On what is best

    Some celebrate the beauty
    of knights, or infantry,
    or billowing flotillas
    at battle on the sea.
    Warfare has its glory,
    but I place far above
    these military splendors
    the one thing that you love.

    For proof of this contention
    examine history:
    we all remember Helen,
    who left her family,
    her child, and royal husband,
    to take a stranger's hand:
    her beauty had no equal,
    but bowed to love's command.

    As love then is the power
    that none can disobey,
    so too my thoughts must follow
    my darling far away:
    the sparkle of her laughter
    would give me greater joy
    than all the bronze-clad heroes

    - translated by Jon Corelis

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    Is ON WHAT IS BEST supposed to be a poem of Sappho's?
    I question that it is because of certain words used in the poem. For example the word knights. Sappho lived circa 620 b.c. to 565 b.c. Knights did not exist in Sappho's time, either literally or physically. There was no conception of knights in her time. Knights is a medieval term. Another word that is used in the poem is the word history. There was no conception of history per se in Sappho's time, much less the use of the word. Herodotus who lived circa 484 b.c. to 425 b.c. and who wrote The Histories is credited with not only creating the first historical work but with conceiving the idea of history.

    Perhaps it's the fault of the translator--John Corelis; maybe he translated certain terms or words Sappho used into more modern terms. Anyway, the poem On What Is Best both appears and sounds to me too modern to have been composed by Sappho.

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    Perhaps it was an interpretation of the translator or a mistake by him, or the poem was wrongly attributed to Sappho, I will do further research into it.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    Here is another translation of the poem that I was able to find:

    Some an army of horsemen, some an army on foot
    and some say a fleet of ships is the loveliest sight
    on this dark earth; but I say it is what-
    ever you desire:

    and it is possible to make this perfectly clear
    to all; for the woman who far surpassed all others
    in her beauty, Helen, left her husband-
    the best of all men -

    behind and sailed far away to Troy; she did not spare
    a single thought for her child nor for her dear parents
    but the goddess of love led her astray

    which
    reminds me now of Anactoria
    although far away.

    translation by Josephine Balmer

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jermac View Post
    Is ON WHAT IS BEST supposed to be a poem of Sappho's?
    I question that it is because of certain words used in the poem. For example the word knights. Sappho lived circa 620 b.c. to 565 b.c. Knights did not exist in Sappho's time, either literally or physically. There was no conception of knights in her time. Knights is a medieval term. Another word that is used in the poem is the word history. There was no conception of history per se in Sappho's time, much less the use of the word. Herodotus who lived circa 484 b.c. to 425 b.c. and who wrote The Histories is credited with not only creating the first historical work but with conceiving the idea of history.

    Perhaps it's the fault of the translator--John Corelis; maybe he translated certain terms or words Sappho used into more modern terms. Anyway, the poem On What Is Best both appears and sounds to me too modern to have been composed by Sappho.
    Interesting observations. I think it is clear that the translator was not using the words 'knights' and 'history' in a rigorously technical way.

    While they (probably) did not belong to orders or subscribe to the code of chivalry, there were cavalrymen in Sappho's time. Ancient Greek cavalrymen were similar in some respects to medieval knights (for example, they were wealthy aristocrats), and it is not uncommon to translate the Greek word for horseman as 'knight' (one of Aristophanes' plays, for example, is often referred to as Knights). The translator in this case probably consciously chose to use the word 'knights' to evoke the romance surrounding medieval knights to reinforce the feeling of those who would say that cavalry is the most beautiful thing in the world.

    As for the word 'history', it's pretty common to use it to simply refer to events that took place in the past, without thought of the scholarly value of the sources. Actually, the translator inserted the word into the poem; there is no word in the poem that the translator is trying to render with the word 'history'. I agree that it draws undue attention to the problem of the nature of myths like the story of Helen.

    For those who are curious, here are some more translations of the same poem: there are four different translations of this poem here and this translation was posted earlier in this thread.
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    It is clear now:

    Neither honey nor
    the honey bee is
    to be mind again.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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