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    Three Sides of the Same Coin

    Three sides of the same coin
    We'll never change yet I want more
    Toss and turn it's still the same
    None could ever take the blame

    Kiss and tell was never it
    Hide and seek left us yearning
    Under broad daylight was the thrill
    And I was never one to yield

    Reverie of the discovery
    Nostalgic of the rapture on display
    Who was I to take away
    When all was open for me to take?

    Dancing on senses ablaze
    Blurring the lines with scalding intensity
    I take it all with eyes of need
    With undertones of lust and greed

    Three sides of the same coin
    We'll never change yet I want more
    Toss and turn it's still the same
    None could ever take the blame

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    Apart from the deeply felt emotions of this piece, how wonderfully you manage the transition from lines that rhyme to ones that don't, allowing the rhyming ones to act as a sort of punctuation or emphasis throughout!

    Welcome to this forum and I hope we see more of you.

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