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    If only could be as happy as we
    thought, once the winding road
    had snapped from too much turning
    around and around, like a
    stairway to heaven friday night air guitar
    fretless and hopeless, strung out
    with much airtime, beating
    Hugo the bear with batter splatter-pale,
    and tricking for a fiver honey.

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    A Really Weird Quarrel...

    What colour is anger

    red, as the flames
    that once ignited my heart
    blue, or is that just a feeling

    black ... when there is no light
    everything is black
    even your glances

    but what does it matter
    it is all blurred in a crossfire
    even the unspoken is painful

    if there were no passion
    we could lead spaghetti lives
    limp and tasteless

    so let the tears fall
    it is my heart's way
    of speaking for me
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
    ~Albert Einstein

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    Somone is gnawing on invicible bones
    and there is nothing to do about it
    as it is completely, and utterly, natural

    There are those who gnaw on bones
    and there are those who observe them
    I observe them, and I favor this the most
    What transforms this world is — knowledge. Do you see what I mean? Nothing else can change anything in this world. Knowledge alone is capable of transforming the world, while at the same time leaving it exactly as it is.

    - Hiraoka Kimitake

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    Geriatric Man

    Alone he will address the troubles
    and flaws of the times:
    willfulness, ignorance
    and drink driving.
    Geriatric Man sees through their disguises
    with a biff and a bam , zimzam,
    flailing taichi magic out of his palms
    he makes them eat fist munchkins,
    sad and sorry for the day
    they turned tail and flew from righteous mindery.
    Geriatric man soars through the age
    with the power of gentle manliness
    and a stiffly starched tie,
    throwing rude people onto the back of his pickup,
    and processing the rubbish at the police station.

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    Neoclassical Matrix

    Woven webs of written illustrations
    Populate a seasoned structure
    Prompting late and plural sensations
    A concocted current reasoned rupture.

    A perfect composition of smitten stealth
    Steals the senses and lines the psyche's shelves
    To decimate underwritten wealth
    Left with the confounded nature of ourselves.

    Hold a grace period to lend a thought
    Of crystalline genius, a radical paragon,
    And manufacture the ideas that were wrought
    Outlining in elyptical polygon.

    So mesmerized the mind at will
    As per our following would uphold us
    Entering the odd empty rind to fill
    And surreptitiously build and mould us.
    "It is not the rich man you should properly call happy, but him who knows with wisdom how to use the blessings of the gods, to endure hard poverty, and who fears dishonor worse than death, and is not afraid to die for cherished friends or fatherland."

    - Horace

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    A Wasp Brings Music in Spring Clouds

    A day like today with all of the windows thrown wide,
    a new wasp near the rim, appearing to want out,
    the window open so near, it seems a trick, as he somehow overlooks the exit.
    I spatula him out.

    The new wasp, lost, with no thought of life, but to life,

    Caught on new blooms, the clouds and the wind,
    the wind won’t stop, nor its music in clouds.
    To play music would act against the wind,
    would disturb the look of the clouds turning in on themselves,
    no music, but a new wasp’s wings, the clouds, and the wind.

    The wind sings of long-ago hills, a wild queen riding bareback,
    breathing crushed clover and sunned horse,
    running heavy and relentless as a mountain falling,
    past the hut of an old mountain man,
    an old man living on raspberry tea,
    keeping warm by the blaze of peacock feathers,
    the blazing eye of peacock tails, his mirror.
    Sleeping in a circle of mushrooms,
    dreaming of wild queens,
    haikai on his tongue, like health.
    A wasp lands in his tea and drowns.

    No music on a day like today, but the wind sings of
    the pallor of winter, the sorrow that strays over all endings,
    no matter how anticipated, or welcomed.

    In hours like these, nothing means more than the lyrics of clouds.
    Last edited by Riesa; 03-08-2009 at 03:58 AM.
    "Don't matter who they are, anybody sets foot in this house, they are company and don't let me catch you remarking on their ways like you were so high and mighty."

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    Quote Originally Posted by kiz_paws View Post
    What colour is anger

    red, as the flames
    that once ignited my heart
    blue, or is that just a feeling

    black ... when there is no light
    everything is black
    even your glances

    but what does it matter
    it is all blurred in a crossfire
    even the unspoken is painful

    if there were no passion
    we could lead spaghetti lives
    limp and tasteless

    so let the tears fall
    it is my heart's way
    of speaking for me

    very nice. I liked " we could leave spaghetti lives, limp and tasteless" very much! yay, kiz. I loved it.
    "Don't matter who they are, anybody sets foot in this house, they are company and don't let me catch you remarking on their ways like you were so high and mighty."

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    ?
    OK
    now
    this's
    I admit
    I do things
    when I see you
    yes, I can't keep still
    when I am far from you
    it's something to remember
    the way you walk so adorned
    Your wardrobe fascinates my senses
    the way you walk so adorned
    it's something to remember
    when I am far from you
    yes, I can't keep still
    when I see you
    I do things
    I admit
    this's
    now
    OK
    !
    Last edited by mmaria; 03-08-2009 at 05:08 PM.
    Love doesn't make the world go round,
    love is what makes the ride worthwhile.

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    LOL mmaria, the first thing I thought of in "looking" at this shape poem was a wardrobe malfunction! Very weird, and clever. (typo in the 10th line)

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    Quote Originally Posted by ~Sophia~ View Post
    LOL mmaria, the first thing I thought of in "looking" at this shape poem was a wardrobe malfunction! Very weird, and clever. (typo in the 10th line)
    Thanks! The situation that inspired it was such: wierd and clever
    Love doesn't make the world go round,
    love is what makes the ride worthwhile.

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    dunno if this is weird or just bad

    you talked of woods but there were no trees in your voice
    and even as you grinned and called yourself my lover,
    the stuffed crocodile peeped out from its planet under the ice
    and phase-shifted round to abstract from itself some more

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    Indigent Lapse

    Fitting together the interface
    That once was dripping like slaw
    Falling like moss at a rapid pace
    Dodging arithmetic law.

    Seldom again will the Mind do time
    Within the confines of limits
    Now I'm aware of a shift sublime
    In the perspective of scale that rivets

    Deftly the tools of calculating
    Resonant fruits in filigree
    Degrees o diffidence abating
    In rays of shed reverie.
    "It is not the rich man you should properly call happy, but him who knows with wisdom how to use the blessings of the gods, to endure hard poverty, and who fears dishonor worse than death, and is not afraid to die for cherished friends or fatherland."

    - Horace

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    Quote Originally Posted by alakungfu View Post
    Fitting together the interface
    That once was dripping like slaw
    Falling like moss at a rapid pace
    Dodging arithmetic law.

    Seldom again will the Mind do time
    Within the confines of limits
    Now I'm aware of a shift sublime
    In the perspective of scale that rivets

    Deftly the tools of calculating
    Resonant fruits in filigree
    Degrees o diffidence abating
    In rays of shed reverie.
    wow, this is really weird and I love the flow and rhymes.

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    weird?

    history flows slower around you,
    measured glint when you cross the road.
    I could have done my ritual of traipse and peek,
    you could have done your ritual of smile and shoulder,
    lips that could be sensual,
    if there was malice
    in the space between the sky outside your window
    and the doorframe borderline,
    I wouldn't have noticed the wars and the floods,
    or the line-up of fathers gone by.
    Life could have brushed through me, uninvolvedly content,
    on its way from here to the night.
    Last edited by SleepyWitch; 03-10-2009 at 12:11 PM.

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    Very nice Sleepy!
    and somehow a dog
    has taken itself & its tail considerably away
    into the mountains or sea or sky, leaving
    behind: me, wag.
    - John Berryman

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