Please Let me know what you think even if it's 2 words.
Everything rushing through my mind
Too quickly to put into words
It all seems so confusing
Like the inside of your brain
Like fileing cabnets with too much paper
Like last weeks su do ku
I値l give you all I can
Not sure what I have to spare
I知 being spread too thin
Like a poor painters water colour
Like a small ring over a fat mans finger
Like the end of the toilet roll
I am always feeling so weak
If my mind is happy
My body must suffer
Oh, two words, O.K.
Wrong Forum
or, how about three? Read Before Posting.
Seriously, the stickies which say read before posting are there for a reason.
Sorry but you don't have to be such an ***Originally Posted by JBI
well.. yea i guess JBI tries to say that it has to be @ the personal Poetry..
no need to be so harsh though...
\I値l give you all I can
Not sure what I have to spare
I知 being spread too thin
like these lines...
yet u can write more better than this..
waiting to read more from u
"He is asleep. Though his mettle was sorely tried,
He lived, and when he lost his angel, died.
It happened calmly, on its own,
The way the night comes when day is done."
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