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    Hope Floats Makai's Avatar
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    Bedeviled

    For this poetess
    after loosing my words
    I check all the cupboards
    in my inspiration stations

    To find them barren
    yawning
    empty egg sacks,
    producing
    nothing viable

    Except a few cobwebbed
    disappointed moths,
    that when released
    vagabond away

    Hands feel leaden,
    the same loss
    I felt when my child
    outgrew them,
    to find his own way
    part of me is gone

    They say patience
    is a virtue,
    but I am a sinner
    Wicked faults
    bedevil me

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    Something's gotta give PrinceMyshkin's Avatar
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    I appreciated the whole of this for the easy, spontaneous voice, but these lines

    Quote Originally Posted by Makai View Post
    Hands feel leaden,
    the same loss
    I felt when my child
    outgrew them
    stood out for me. Thanks.

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