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  1. 01-19-2009, 12:30 AM #1
    jon1jt
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    Brief Encounter

    **Previously posted, but revised. Hope nobody minds.

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    "He was nauseous with regret when he saw her face again, and when, as of yore, he pleaded and begged at her knees for the joy of her being. She understood Neal; she stroked his hair; she knew he was mad."
    ---Jack Kerouac, On The Road: The Original Scroll
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  2. 01-20-2009, 12:38 AM #2
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    these poems i love
    one like above -
    the moment caught
    and too, your thought
    that part of you
    that you did share
    an brief insight
    a gift so rare
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  3. 01-20-2009, 02:28 AM #3
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    yikes.


    pretty poetry in your poem though, like

    "in my shadow cast you tore off
    leaving behind your voice "
    "Don't matter who they are, anybody sets foot in this house, they are company and don't let me catch you remarking on their ways like you were so high and mighty."
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