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    The cup of life

    This beautiful silence cannot be ignored
    as I stand here
    I am alone
    in this world that surrounds me
    there is no one else
    at last, I am at peace
    I have reassurance of perfect stillness and harmony

    From the ship
    a welcome wind hails as I stare into the vastness
    and the smell of rain fills my lungs and veins
    pure blue sky and the serenity of deep dark waters beneath

    frees my spirit...

    and now

    with a fixed clarity, I am well presented with greatness,
    Before me

    Look!
    Majestic mountains of cloud thrive in the open space of sky
    while lightning bolts of silver dance over the timeless, pulsating abyss

    approaching us, is this frightening, magnificent squall


    Are you afraid?

    Soon we shall be deeply and completely drenched
    in turmoil and tornadoes
    hale and havoc
    evasion is no longer an option

    The darkened wonder echoes with a deep cry,
    announcing its imminence

    I am ready
    eager and expectant to drink the fullness of this cup

    the cup of death and destruction you ask?

    No,
    the cup of life

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    Life is always perpetual topic, apparently,This is a good peom,and I am enjoying it.
    Rock in the ocean ...

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    Very lovely poem and flows easyily. A nice subject and a good way of describing it.
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    Thanks for the positive comments!

    This is a scene I saw in my head, and just had to describe it. It is when danger, fear and devestation is imminent, but you just have this perfect peace inside you, knowing that all around will be destoyed and burned, but only to allow patches of dark green grass to sprout throughout the blackened field...

    I guess it depens on how you look at things. The attitute of your heart towards life.

    We can choose to shrink back in the face of a storm, or we can choose to stand in awe of the thunder, lightning and electric atmosphere, even if it is only for the last few minutes of our lives.

    We cannot control what is going to happen to us, but we can control how we go through it.

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