for Virgil
for Virgil
Last edited by jon1jt; 02-03-2009 at 02:02 AM.
"He was nauseous with regret when he saw her face again, and when, as of yore, he pleaded and begged at her knees for the joy of her being. She understood Neal; she stroked his hair; she knew he was mad."
---Jack Kerouac, On The Road: The Original Scroll
Good Lord.
LET THERE BE LIGHT
"Love follows knowledge." – St. Catherine of Siena
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Originally Posted by Virgil
"He was nauseous with regret when he saw her face again, and when, as of yore, he pleaded and begged at her knees for the joy of her being. She understood Neal; she stroked his hair; she knew he was mad."
---Jack Kerouac, On The Road: The Original Scroll
Shouldn't "ring a lingy" be hyphenated?
I dunno. It's a bit Bukowski-ish.
[secretly laughing my, um, head off]
Last edited by blp; 01-10-2009 at 10:31 AM.
I don't know what to say. uhm the imagery is good? (lol)
*incredulous* *mouth agape*
CARPE DIEM! Seize the day! Make your lives extraordinary!
-Dead Poets' Society
I SWEAR, BY MY LIFE AND MY LOVE OF IT, THAT I WILL NEVER LIVE FOR THE SAKE OF ANOTHER MAN, NOR ASK ANOTHER MAN TO LIVE FOR MINE.
- John Galt, Atlas Shrugged
Good one! Enjoyed it thoroughly.
Great stuff! Particularly good: the nonchalant, matter-of-fact tone.
Freaking hilarious man!
This almost had me in the floor laughing.
Great stuff, let it rip!
...Who has the air freshener?
I just read my Coke bottle:
Listen closely &
hear the
happiness being
unleased
when you open
this bottle.
It made me think of the first part.
Stinky stuff... *Yes, Good Lord!*
"It's so mysterious, the land of tears."
Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry
I have to echo Virgil's "Good Lord" only mine has an exclamation point or two. !! but it is undeniably funny, imaginative and well-written.
"Don't matter who they are, anybody sets foot in this house, they are company and don't let me catch you remarking on their ways like you were so high and mighty."
so you've returned to post fart poems eh!?
it has pretty good sound mechanics, but overall I'm with blp on this one.
and somehow a dog
has taken itself & its tail considerably away
into the mountains or sea or sky, leaving
behind: me, wag.
- John Berryman
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