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    Be my nucleus
    Haul my heart,mind and soul
    Let me end in you

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    Let me end in you
    for with you my life began
    there is only us

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    let me end in you.
    After drinking my last drink
    sight passes away

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    sorry you bet me to that one. Next person, start from where you will.

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    there is only us
    you are me and me is you
    Long live our love!
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    Long live our love
    as a paradigm for hearts
    who love love the most
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    Who love love the most
    and yet as the faded moon
    star dust can blind you
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
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    Star dust can blind you,
    but don't let that stop you from
    reaching for the sky

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    reaching for the sky
    I dislocated my arm
    oh god, it hurts, aaah!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Silas Thorne View Post
    reaching for the sky
    I dislocated my arm
    oh god, it hurts, aaah!
    Well played, sir!

    Oh God, it hurts, aaah!
    A strong burning sensation,
    perhaps I'm ablaze

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    Thanks!

    perhaps I'm ablaze
    with love for her crimson lips
    she makes me suffer

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    She makes me suffer
    memories rain yielding pain
    will union ever befall again

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    sorry, but try again. That last line is much longer than five syllables, so it's hard for anyone to continue from it. 5 syllables in line 1, 7 in line 2, and 5 in line 3. You can do it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Silas Thorne View Post
    sorry, but try again. That last line is much longer than five syllables, so it's hard for anyone to continue from it. 5 syllables in line 1, 7 in line 2, and 5 in line 3. You can do it.
    Sorry my bad, ignore my post anyone can start from

    'She makes me suffer'

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    No, that's alright. It just takes practice. I'm sure you can do it, but if you don't want to try now, try again later. It gets easier.

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