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    The Poetic Warrior Dark Muse's Avatar
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    Who Am I?

    Who Am I?

    Forgetfulness the nightmare
    that ever haunts me;
    looking into the mirror
    all I can ask is
    Who am I?

    The answer escapes,
    and I am left lost
    to wander in the darkness
    Who am I?

    The reflection
    in the mirror is a stranger;
    I woke up in an unknown place
    with no past to account for
    Who am I?

    Strange clothes
    in a strange room,
    surrounded by things
    unfamiliar; images
    of this body I carry
    framed on the walls
    Who am I?

    Others try to tell me,
    but the stories they fill
    me with mean nothing,
    they are for some other person
    Who am I?

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    Wild is the Wind Silas Thorne's Avatar
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    Exactly. I remember reading a Zen koan that asked: where am I? Who is this 'self' that changes with every second, to pass on to another self? Which of our selves is thinking now. Are they thinking togther or alone, or are we the self that used to inhabit this body?

    I like the phrase 'mean nothing' in the third to last line, it can be interpreted in a couple of different ways. I like the idea that nothing is mean, if you take it as that.

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    Thank you

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    All are at the crossroads qimissung's Avatar
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    Very Poelike in the haunting wonder, Dark Muse.
    "The important thing is not to stop questioning. Curiosity has its' own reason for existing." ~ Albert Einstein
    "Remember, no matter where you go, there you are." Buckaroo Bonzai
    "Some people say I done alright for a girl." Melanie Safka

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    Why thank you very much

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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