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    Serious Delirious

    When pictures starts to move in
    I turn the other way
    When all my books are empty
    I don't know what to say

    One day up and one day down, one lie slowly touch the ground

    I'll never touched the future
    So don't tell em no liesA suite that never suited you
    You're cracking up inside

    One lie slowly hit the ground, one lie slowly touched the sound of..

    Delirious, serious delirious

    A tear is just a vision
    of what I never said.
    My dream is just a mirror
    of a wasted life in bed

    One day up and one day down, one lie slowly touch the ground

    Delirious, serious delirious


    I'm losing control, I'm lost in time, I'm fire, I'm snow
    A burning pain fills my heart, a bleeding mixtured life without the rain
    I'm with out the rain
    Seal Searching....

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    Your poem fits the mood i am in right now, from what i made of it.

    A tear is just a vision
    of what I never said.
    My dream is just a mirror
    of a wasted life in bed

    Mostly this part. I just finished a book(part one ina series) called "sweep-part 1 book of shadows" really good. took two hours to read. only about 200 pages,

    -Phoen-x
    "My body won't succumb to my heart and it's tearing me apart"

    "There is no point to democracy when ignorance is celebrated"

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    Thank you, Phoenix!

    I had 'one of those days' type of day, should've stayed in bed...
    Seal Searching....

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    funny, i did stay in bed, i am typing from its edge..
    "My body won't succumb to my heart and it's tearing me apart"

    "There is no point to democracy when ignorance is celebrated"

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    this is an awesome poem. i love "a tear is just a vision of what was never said..." you put that in such a perfect way. that might be one of my favorite lines i've read.

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