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    Dante Valtierra
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    Sleep

    The dampness creeps over, the darkest of nights,
    but here i am, out seeing the sights.
    Listening to crickets, birds and toads,
    i wander the parks, beach and road.
    When off in the distance, i hear a strange sound,
    a scittering, scattering, bone-chilling sound.
    And as it draws near, the flash of the skin,
    the ice cold sensation, and then it begins.
    I feel it wrap cold arms around me,
    but i do not fear for it holds me so gently.
    Its breath, oh so soothing, i hate to admit,
    and its sight is so beutiful i lapse into fit.
    I feel the teeth sink into mine flesh,
    and the agony hits me, new, and fresh.
    "You will be mine!" Said the voice to me,
    and thats all that i needed, to drift into sleep.
    Show me your love, sink your teeth into mine flesh.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gothic Poet View Post
    The dampness creeps over, the darkest of nights,
    but here i am, out seeing the sights.
    Listening to crickets, birds and toads,
    i wander the parks, beach and road.
    When off in the distance, i hear a strange sound,
    a scittering, scattering, bone-chilling sound.
    And as it draws near, the flash of the skin,
    the ice cold sensation, and then it begins.
    I feel it wrap cold arms around me,
    but i do not fear for it holds me so gently.
    Its breath, oh so soothing, i hate to admit,
    and its sight is so beutiful i lapse into fit.
    I feel the teeth sink into mine flesh,
    and the agony hits me, new, and fresh.
    "You will be mine!" Said the voice to me,
    and thats all that i needed, to drift into sleep.
    Positively beautiful. I am a fan of poetry and Anne Rice, though I am not acquainted with all of her books. I applaud you.

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    Something's Gone hoope's Avatar
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    WoW... wonderful poem...
    i liked it alot.. Waiting for more poems by you .
    "He is asleep. Though his mettle was sorely tried,
    He lived, and when he lost his angel, died.
    It happened calmly, on its own,
    The way the night comes when day is done."



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