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    Registered User Xillus_Xavier's Avatar
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    Some Cinquains

    Here's a few cinquains I came up with recently.

    Needing a Lift

    walking,
    right arm outstretched,
    thumb pointing to the sky,
    the man in the rain watches cars
    speed by.


    Lurking Danger

    the duck,
    gently drifting
    upon a peaceful pond,
    doesn't detect the weed-hidden
    hunter.


    The Country Life

    the cows
    in the pasture
    chew their cud while watching
    the young boy at the pond reel in
    a fish.


    Little Brown Hitchhiker

    A leaf
    on my windshield,
    whose stem is pinned beneath
    the wiper blade, flutters as
    I drive.

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    I really like these! Especially the first one! good job.
    "Come away O human child!To the waters of the wild, With a faery hand in hand, For the worlds more full of weeping than you can understand."
    W.B.Yeats

    "If it looks like a Dwarf and smells like a Dwarf, then it's probably a Dwarf (or a latrine wearing dungarees)"
    Artemins Fowl and the Lost Colony by Eoin Colfer


    my poems-please comment Forum Rules

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    "Needing a lift" is great!

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