could you have a look at my poem Population: 1? I would appreciate any suggestions. I was experimenting a little with internal monolouge but I am afraid some of his thoughts didn't share the same voice as the rest of the poem. I have more comments on the matter but I will await yours.
Permit me to doubt.
Alright, gastbysghost
I will certainly have a look at your poem. But I advise you to use the personal messages option, next time you want to ask something pointed to an individual user.
(The topic-name 'Bartholomeus Bloom' scared the hell out of me: am I a poem written by some guy called gastbysghost?)
too funny
Permit me to doubt.
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