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    ^My Pen Name^ Justin Rockwell's Avatar
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    Arrow Epiphany (Audio)

    Hello everyone, please LISTEN to my poem "Epiphany" on my MySpace player and tell me what you think...

    http://www.myspace.com/justinrockwellmusic

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    The Poetic Warrior Dark Muse's Avatar
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    I just finnished listening to your poem, and I thought it was very powerful, with a strong message behind it.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    Unfortunately, I use a system called "webtv" and it is unable to access myspace audio. I tried, just in case, but, no joy!

    The response from "Dark Muse" would indicate to me that your poem has merit, as I respect her judgment...


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    Wow, do I really dislike Myspace....but on a more relevant note....very powerful poem (and on a more irrelevant note: got to love the synthesizer!)
    I wrote a poem on a leaf and it blew away...

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    It was cool! a great way to hear your poem. thanks for sharing.
    "Don't matter who they are, anybody sets foot in this house, they are company and don't let me catch you remarking on their ways like you were so high and mighty."

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    This is the sort of poem and performance that could finally make me actually like rap! Well done, bro!
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Hi, any chance you could include a written post? Myspace is no good for me either.
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    Uhhhh, the written version wont be as "pro" as I want it to be, can I have your e-mail address so I can just send the MP3 as an attachment and you can post your thoughts here??
    Myspace.com/JustinRockwellMusic

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