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    My Sweetheart, the Artist

    My Sweetheart, the Artist

    She's always been the violent type.
    A painter of pain, she
    constantly covers my kiss-prepped canvas,
    expressing her love with vivid hues of blues and blacks,
    the greens of intimacy, wrathful reds,
    and purples left by lusty lips.

    I nicknamed her my Monet of Misery,
    the prodigy of pleasurable agony.
    One must admire her creativeness:
    the patterned claw marks down my back -
    works of art which I inspired -
    are masterpieces worn with pride,
    the pink, six-stitch blemish hiding
    snakelike within my right eyebrow,
    brushed on with her crafty elbow
    in a tickle war one night.
    The heart-shaped, singed
    spot of skin on my abdomen -
    an artistic aftermath of candle wax sketches.

    But just for once I wouldn't mind
    her being a bit more Bob Ross:
    gently stroking, dabbing the canvas,
    creating "happy little clouds".
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    All are at the crossroads qimissung's Avatar
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    I hope this doesn't bother you, but-how completely adorable!
    "The important thing is not to stop questioning. Curiosity has its' own reason for existing." ~ Albert Einstein
    "Remember, no matter where you go, there you are." Buckaroo Bonzai
    "Some people say I done alright for a girl." Melanie Safka

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    Thanks!
    I'm glad you liked it.

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    Beautiful conceit. Now, of course, I will have to google Bob Ross.

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    Crafty poem! And I thought it was the artiste who had to do all the suffering!

    goldenrod.

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    Now, of course, I will have to google Bob Ross
    Ahhh, Bob Ross...loved watching his show when I was kid.
    In a 30 minute, commercial-less episode, he could turn a blank canvas
    into an impressive landscape painting. I need to look up some of the episodes online if I can.

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