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    prisoner of the soul

    Prisoner of the soul

    so many thoughts flow through my mind as i stare at these four walls
    trying to keep my faith alive even when my spirit stumbles and falls,
    i know i made many mistakes for which i now must pay
    but accepting that fact doesn’t make it any easier to get through the day
    so i turn to god,hoping to make the time go fast
    praying his forgiveness will wash away the sins of my past,
    hoping the pain will end and the lonliness subside
    i try to renew old dreams i once thought died,
    i educate myself on how good life could be
    but first i must have the strength to stay straight when im free,
    i know if i believe in myself and try to do whats right
    there’ll come a day when i’m released into the warm sunlight,
    a day ill walk down the street and be proud of what i am
    with the future shining bright and the past finally becoming dim

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    Pretty good poem, I can relate...

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    I like this very much, I can relate to parts of it very strongly!
    Blessed are the cracked, for it is they who let in the light.......

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