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    Quote Originally Posted by Gilead View Post
    Sorry about that, ampoule. A misunderstanding on my part.

    Pastoral

    It is twelve in the afternoon:
    The clouds are docile and
    Lazy in drifting where the wind may blow
    To set themselves afloat in the sea of
    Magnolia

    It is twelve in the afternoon:
    The trees stir and
    Murmur in anticipation
    Of the sun that will cast their shadows
    Empty

    It is twelve in the afternoon:
    The sheep whisper and
    Talk amongst them
    Placidly waiting for the kill
    Still

    It is twelve in the afternoon:
    The day is hazy and
    The sun is high
    Nothing moves and all things hang
    Uncertain
    Welcome, indeed. Wonderful work!
    "You must be the change you want to see in the world." Gandhi

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    Pastoral

    When the swing holds me
    with its slats of air,
    the blossoms in the orchard,
    and the uphill breeze
    give me motion not unlike
    the clouds sinking
    over my front porch roof
    into their blue sea,
    and I into the ocean of perception.

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    By Candlelight

    Aeons ago, or so it seems (I think it was April), firefangled posted a theme of Candle and I thought of this line, a poem, and for some reason I just couldn't seem to get it down. And today I did. Isn't poetry strange? So, this belongs here, really, not quite really finished, but kind of.

    By Candlelight

    His hands are as steady as the rain
    falling through the cracks in the porch roof.
    Slow light from the candle.
    He cups the flame; the trembling stops
    though the after-effects linger.
    I shiver.
    Wax drips onto the table
    and hardens there, a swollen pool.

    His breath is the sound of the wind
    rattling the door as the storm breaks.
    We are alone here,
    together,
    surrounded by night, the storm,
    and somewhere out of view, the stars.
    The flame flickers. Our shadows
    on the wall melt, amalgamate.

    His mouth is as soft as the clouds
    pressed into the hills and the dark sky.
    We find each other,
    fluid, formless as light.
    I think: this is how we enter the next life.
    Sliding into warm openings,
    breathless, hungry and searching;
    soft light, a steady light calling us there.

    His body is the flame of the light
    burning where his skin is touching mine.
    We are one,
    together
    moving like the storm;
    destroying, creating the world over.
    The candle shudders and dies.
    In the damp sky, dawn light pools on the horizon.
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    You may keep these up now that you are back, but under no pressure from me.

    I'm just happy you are back and with such a sensuous and brilliant poem. I for one could have waited longer in the dark, knowing you would be here eventually. What comes comes when it comes.

    Good to see you Fifth.

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    Thanks firefangled good to see you too.
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    Remembrance

    Impressions of the square from the monument

    “To the memory of the following officers non-commissioned officers
    and men who fell in the war in South Africa 1899-1902”


    They died for this: stone at their feet,
    and beyond a bustling summer market.

    Bennett, Bolton, Buckett…

    Hot scent of grilled fat,
    spilled beer and sauerkraut,
    potatoes and bacon in two foot wide pans.
    At the other end: wheatgrass,
    strawberry smoothies,
    hot vegan wraps, and organic hummus.

    …Cooke, Cooper, Crinion…

    Stone, earth and rocks,
    bespoke silver jewellery,
    handcrafted bags: overpriced, under-made.
    Tulips from Holland, sharp local cheeses,
    replica watches, almost the real thing.

    …Lally, Lewis, Lindsay…

    Jazz brass in the background
    (Parker, Gillespie?),
    bickering voices rise over the notes.
    People rush by, my soldiers they see them
    busily talking on their mobile phones.

    …Stott, Sellers, Sutcliffe, Smith…

    For sovereign and country: they died for this.
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheFifthElement View Post
    Impressions of the square from the monument

    “To the memory of the following officers non-commissioned officers
    and men who fell in the war in South Africa 1899-1902”


    They died for this: stone at their feet,
    and beyond a bustling summer market.

    Bennett, Bolton, Buckett…

    Hot scent of grilled fat,
    spilled beer and sauerkraut,
    potatoes and bacon in two foot wide pans.
    At the other end: wheatgrass,
    strawberry smoothies,
    hot vegan wraps, and organic hummus.

    …Cooke, Cooper, Crinion…

    Stone, earth and rocks,
    bespoke silver jewellery,
    handcrafted bags: overpriced, under-made.
    Tulips from Holland, sharp local cheeses,
    replica watches, almost the real thing.

    …Lally, Lewis, Lindsay…

    Jazz brass in the background
    (Parker, Gillespie?),
    bickering voices rise over the notes.
    People rush by, my soldiers they see them
    busily talking on their mobile phones.

    …Stott, Sellers, Sutcliffe, Smith…

    For sovereign and country: they died for this.

    You structured this so well, the walk. I think the art of this is that you passed no judgement in the way it was worded. The reader is left with the whole question of what you have made them see walking beside you.

    At first I was thinking disrespect, but then I read it again and is seemed all about freedom of enterprise and expression.

    Well done, Fifth.

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    Quote Originally Posted by firefangled View Post
    You structured this so well, the walk. I think the art of this is that you passed no judgement in the way it was worded. The reader is left with the whole question of what you have made them see walking beside you.

    At first I was thinking disrespect, but then I read it again and is seemed all about freedom of enterprise and expression.

    Well done, Fifth.
    Thanks firefangled - you're right, of course, it was not intended as being in anyway disrespectful, more a reflection of the fact that their sacrifice allowed those who remained the freedom to live how they choose, good or bad. And also a thought, or a hope perhaps, that if they had lived they would have been right there, chomping on the hot food, listening to the jazz and, perhaps, dancing. Dancing would be nice.
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    What's the word?
    "O reason, reason, abstract phantom of the waking state, I had already expelled you from my dreams, now I have reached a point where those dreams are about to become fused with apparent realities: now there is only room here for myself. "
    -Louis Aragon


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    Quote Originally Posted by AdoreroDio View Post
    What's the word?

    I believe we're still on pastoral but if you would like to choose a new word that would be great!
    I'm in love with The Vinegar Man and Mr. Tanner, but be careful, it could just as easily be you.

    "If you're going to write you better have somewhere to come from." Flannery O'Connor

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    Exclamation The Word is "Sleepless"

    Hotel Insomnia

    I can’t sleep, but that doesn’t mean I don’t have company.
    I’m sitting here staring into an unblinking screen,
    Surrounded by the ghosts of disappointed hopes and dreams.
    Tried a sleeping pill, but I’ve had my fill of medical remedies.
    Think I’ll go make myself a nice cup of Chamomile Tea.
    My eyes turn into scarlet pits of human misery…
    Why when you need it so, does sleep decide to flee?

    Pendragon
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    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Second thoughts

    *removed*
    Last edited by TheFifthElement; 08-29-2008 at 07:29 PM.
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    I wrote this rather a long time ago. But whatev.

    Insomnia
    Lie awake,
    Screaming headache,
    White-hot tears
    Follow fears.
    I want a sleep
    For dreams too deep,
    But too many thoughts,
    Too many knots,
    To be able to steer
    Away from my fear
    For all the feelings
    That I can't feel.
    Snow White is doing dishes again, 'cause what else can you do with seven itty bitty men?

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    At Midnight

    Tell me shadows,
    who
    has hung the crescent
    moon
    so slant and golden?
    Who
    woke me and made this dream
    ensue?

    The cat watches by the lake, and
    soon
    stalks his prey among the branches.
    Who
    made this sleepless night?
    Who
    gave it to the owl and
    loon?

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    Quote Originally Posted by firefangled View Post
    Tell me shadows,
    who
    has hung the crescent
    moon
    so slant and golden?
    Who
    woke me and made this dream
    ensue?

    The cat watches by the lake, and
    soon
    stalks his prey among the branches.
    Who
    made this sleepless night?
    Who
    gave it to the owl and
    loon?
    I want to sleep so I can dream about this. Lovely.
    I'm in love with The Vinegar Man and Mr. Tanner, but be careful, it could just as easily be you.

    "If you're going to write you better have somewhere to come from." Flannery O'Connor

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