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    Black Water



    Black Water

    Run through me, soak me, dig me, seal me and have me
    Like I have nowhere on earth to go, no heaven to crave for
    Dream through in raging tides of the black water
    I will be gone with it on me, in and out of me
    All over,there is no betweenness of my will towards my death
    And time has it,my beauty, my youth and the peace of my last days
    The love I can not give is for I don't have it without being a part of it
    Did my beauty bend the world or the world could not hold it?
    And I have nil to return the greasy favor
    If only I could I would blow it. Ashes to ashes,dream into dust
    Black water,stay around. Like you have nowhere to go on earth
    Leave your kisses all over my space,inch by inch,may tenderness linger
    How much dose all my strong blood weight?
    Keep it in a bottle and throw it into the black water
    Like it has nowhere to go on earth,no other perfect clay for reincarnation
    Love it and leave it like kids wave goodbye to their worn toys
    The river runs through their doors,takes away their paper boats


    The poem is dedicated to Gia M.Carangi.


    " Life and death. Energy and peace. If I stop today,it will still worth it. Even the terrible mistakes I've made or would have ummade if I could. The pains that burnt me and scared my soul. It was worth it. Or have being a lot to walk where I've walked which was to hell on earth, heaven on earth, back again,into,under,far in between,thro it, in it and above..." --- Gia <1960 -1986>


    Nothing but nothingness

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    in a blue moon amuse's Avatar
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    this is really good. after reading i googled for info on her...what a beautiful spirit she had.

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    I like this one... just not too sure why. I think it might be its darkness.

    I love this part: "Ashes to ashes, dream into dust", it's perfect.
    I have a plan: attack!

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    Thanks for reading it. I loved the movie Gia,you can go check it out if interested. It is a good piece.
    Nothing but nothingness

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