your heart betrays you!
can't you see, he loves you not!
he's only a friend.
your heart betrays you!
can't you see, he loves you not!
he's only a friend.
A bit that I wrote: Vanilla Ice Cream. Comments and critique welcomed! :-)
he's only a friend
I like him but don't love him
hope things will improve
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When asked how World War III would be fought, Einstein replied that he didn't know. But he knew how World War IV would be fought: With sticks and stones.
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hope things will improve
the say that time heals all wounds
resolves many diff's
A bit that I wrote: Vanilla Ice Cream. Comments and critique welcomed! :-)
NAY, ZANNA, no abbreviations !!!
resolves many diff's
but not the one between good,
bad and the ugly !
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When asked how World War III would be fought, Einstein replied that he didn't know. But he knew how World War IV would be fought: With sticks and stones.
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ummmm, maz, lighten up -- technically speaking, in the 'real' haiku world, they do not allow for contractions either (isn't, didn't, it'll, aren't, and so on) which we have all used here at one time or another... Have fun people (just stay with the 5-7-5 rhythm and its all good!)Originally Posted by mazHur
Bad and the ugly
creating unwanted scenes
lets scrap this movie
Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
~Albert Einstein
ummmm, maz, lighten up -- technically speaking, in the 'real' haiku world, they do not allow for contractions either (isn't, didn't, it'll, aren't, and so on) which we have all used here at one time or another... Have fun people (just stay with the 5-7-5 rhythm and its all good!)
Bad and the ugly
creating unwanted scenes
lets scrap this movie
KIZ---you have a point there but yet there is a lot of diff btwn the admssble srn't,didn't, etc and pls, asap, btw, etc etc , isn't it?? Anyway, I said that to zanna in light humor only incl this,,,,let's kp up wth 5/7/5=18 that's fine ! thx
lets scrap this movie
and s-tart with a new one
a short serial
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When asked how World War III would be fought, Einstein replied that he didn't know. But he knew how World War IV would be fought: With sticks and stones.
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a short serial
man and bear coexist in
forest, under stars
[QUOTE=kiz_paws;513238]ummmm, maz, lighten up -- technically speaking, in the 'real' haiku world, they do not allow for contractions either (isn't, didn't, it'll, aren't, and so on) which we have all used here at one time or another... Have fun people (just stay with the 5-7-5 rhythm and its all good!)
Right on, and consider that some great writers who wrote haiku--e.g. Jack Kerouac's Book of Haiku---didn't even follow the 5-7-5 form because they thought it was creatively constraining.
forest, under stars
stars rest like books in bookshelves,
forest tends to love
"He was nauseous with regret when he saw her face again, and when, as of yore, he pleaded and begged at her knees for the joy of her being. She understood Neal; she stroked his hair; she knew he was mad."
---Jack Kerouac, On The Road: The Original Scroll
forest under stars
light up their green and wait... for
the next howl to come.
....
.
...the smell of flowers through metal labyrinths.
too slow.
Forest tends to love.
The clouds give. We but recieve.
And recieve thereby.
.
...the smell of flowers through metal labyrinths.
And receive thereby
I mix the clouds in red wine
and declare sweetness.
"He was nauseous with regret when he saw her face again, and when, as of yore, he pleaded and begged at her knees for the joy of her being. She understood Neal; she stroked his hair; she knew he was mad."
---Jack Kerouac, On The Road: The Original Scroll
and declare sweetness
to linger in skies, tumbling
clouds shifting when viewed
and somehow a dog
has taken itself & its tail considerably away
into the mountains or sea or sky, leaving
behind: me, wag.
- John Berryman
[QUOTE=jon1jt;513305]i agree !ummmm, maz, lighten up -- technically speaking, in the 'real' haiku world, they do not allow for contractions either (isn't, didn't, it'll, aren't, and so on) which we have all used here at one time or another... Have fun people (just stay with the 5-7-5 rhythm and its all good!)
Right on, and consider that some great writers who wrote haiku--e.g. Jack Kerouac's Book of Haiku---didn't even follow the 5-7-5 form because they thought it was creatively constraining.
forest, under stars
stars rest like books in bookshelves,
forest tends to love
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When asked how World War III would be fought, Einstein replied that he didn't know. But he knew how World War IV would be fought: With sticks and stones.
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speed thrills but 'grills''!
nice to see you back !
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When asked how World War III would be fought, Einstein replied that he didn't know. But he knew how World War IV would be fought: With sticks and stones.
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clouds shifting when viewed
look like monsters hastening
to fall on some patch
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When asked how World War III would be fought, Einstein replied that he didn't know. But he knew how World War IV would be fought: With sticks and stones.
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