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    Unscheduled Flight



    Unscheduled Flight


    A subtle surprise, it’s a stranger to these parts
    of an uncharted soul, sputtering in fits and starts.

    Emily got it right when she wrote
    about the obscure thing with feathers;
    for birds, who live their lives by rote,
    like old salts navigate unpredicted weathers

    and endure the fluke of a cloudy unknown.
    Turned away from fine and softer winds, they find
    a way to ascend an ever-descending slope.
    Fearless, they fly with wings of a brighter mind

    amid the stormy clash, as they in clearer skies had flown
    with freshness and freedom and this new thing, hope.


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    I have the one quibble with this otherwise graceful poem, which is your treatment of Ms Dickinson as if she were a familiar.

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    and I like that. Emily? Ohhhhh.....EM-ily.
    Love your poem Auntie, like all of them.
    I'm in love with The Vinegar Man and Mr. Tanner, but be careful, it could just as easily be you.

    "If you're going to write you better have somewhere to come from." Flannery O'Connor

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    Tut-tut. Poor Emily needed friends in life and perhaps Auntie has become a friend with The Faded Flower's ghost. Great poem.
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    And we can only imagine the loftier heights to which Miss Dickinson would've flown had she been able to get out of
    the house once in a while!

    Thank you, Prince, Amp, and Pen for your comments.

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