
Originally Posted by
amalia1985
The extremely interesting passage that you posted, Janine, gave me many opportunities to contemplate on the issues relevant here, both regarding Miriam and Paul’s relationship and the way Lawrence chooses to describe it.
“…till he had seen it…” Miriam seems to be so much in love with Paul that she literally views the world through his eyes.
“…communion together…” A sexual connotation? I would say- as we have all stated previously- that here, we talk about spirituality. Miriam views the affair as something sacred, superior, and spiritual, as if it was The Holy Communion for her.
“sky, earth, pearl”: Again-as we have already seen in his poems- Nature plays a vital role for Lawrence. I would dare to add that in university, in various subjects- from poetry to theater- we had been told that “pines” usually carry a sexual connection. Notice that Miriam “gazes rather frightened”, I think I could venture to relate these two points of the passage.
We have many touching, vivid images, where the reader can actually “see” and “feel” the sparkling. Ivory can be another reference to purity, and the importance of it for Miriam.
Janine, I agree with you. The part where Paul mentions the butterflies is very poignant. For Miriam, purity and virginity are treasures. Paul is a treasure to her, as well, so she wants to share every little thing that she loves with him, as you’ve already said. But, I think that Paul does not want her “holy”, and this spirituality of hers probably, unsettles him.
I would put much emphasis on Miriam’s dark eyes, a very important feature. Many heroines- not only of Lawrence, but of the majority of authors- attract attention with their dark eyes, e. g. Anna Karenina or Collin’s “Woman in White”. Perhaps, it is a symbol of mystery and warmth. I don’t think it has much to do with purity, but even if we take daily experiences in our mind, the dark eyes of a man or a woman is always something that attracts attention.
“She might have been one of the women who went with Mary when Jesus was dead.” A very important statement, I would say. I believe it as another indication of Miriam’s spiritual love, “freed” from the aspirations of a carnal relationship, like Mary Magdalene’s love for Jesus, perhaps? Quite controversial for many, but a possibility we have to keep in mind, regarding Lawrence’s use of the example. Can it be accidental? I wouldn’t think so.
Janine, I would say that the sun can be a reference to the kind of love Paul would want to have. Not spiritual, but warm. Perhaps, sun stands for passion? Both Paul and Miriam love Nature immensely, they are “children” of it, but each one gives it a different dimension. Life and Nature are closely connected. Paul loves life, and I agree with you, Janine, regarding the image of “the dead crust”.