I need serious help with this essay,i have to comment on the importance of the scene, put in quotes,audience reaction, describe the atmospere,explain how the theme of fate is important,analyse mercutios death and its impact on the audience,then the conclusion. I have done it twice and the teacher as given it back and said do it again, i am really begging now cannt get my head round this. help!!!!!:
Being able to see the "rejected" essay drafts might be really helpful - it would allow us to "polish" instead of "create from scratch."
"I believe in Christianity as I believe that the sun has risen, not only because I see it, but because by it I see everything else." - C.S. Lewis
Did the teacher tell you why you have to re-do it?
I agree with everyone above. If you can tell us a bit more about why it is being rejected, what the teacher wants, and let us see the drafts I'm sure you will get a bit more guidance. I'll check back soon to see if you have added anything, and hopefully I'll be able to be of some help. Good luck to you.
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