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    Thank you! i liked the twist in the end of your haiku. Made me smile.

    Hazelnut parfait
    on her tounge melts to delight-
    icecream alchemy
    Words, cold, clumsy when I speak
    From her mouth, her warmth flows sweet.

    pearls
    "Man was made for joy and woe;
    And when this we rightly know
    Through the world we safely go" Blake

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    Not all waste products
    Are wholly without value
    Sometimes we don't see
    The aesthetic in nature
    That's hidden by the mundane

    Topic: Europe
    Faith is believing what you know ain't so - Mark Twain

    The preachers deal with men of straw, as they are men of straw themselves - Henry David Thoreau

    The way to see faith is to shut the eye of reason - Benjamin Franklin

    The teaching of the church, theoretically astute, is a lie in practice and a compound of vulgar superstitions and sorcery - Leo Tolstoy

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    Wellspring of pilgrims
    Victim of Oedipal scorn
    Neon signs, old stone
    Eating trends out of the hands
    of its mutated child

    (Sorry, didn't come out very flatteringly, did it? )

    TOPIC -- America

    (oh, just go for it )
    If you had to live with this you'd rather lie than fall.
    You think I can't fly? Well, you just watch me!

    ~The Dresden Dolls

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    US like a cloudburst waits
    For the perfect time
    Days eat the seams of our lives
    Life economic
    Our fears make us weary, tired
    We sleep alone with our dreams

    Topic: tolerance
    Faith is believing what you know ain't so - Mark Twain

    The preachers deal with men of straw, as they are men of straw themselves - Henry David Thoreau

    The way to see faith is to shut the eye of reason - Benjamin Franklin

    The teaching of the church, theoretically astute, is a lie in practice and a compound of vulgar superstitions and sorcery - Leo Tolstoy

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    The rain has passed
    We talk about the old times-
    skinned head and hate
    He says “I am free now and
    it is so easy to breathe”

    This midsummer I talked with an old friend. He has met a woman and he is in love. She is jewish. He told me what a relief it was to let go of his old intolerance. So, that is the reason for the poem.

    Next topic - celebration
    "Man was made for joy and woe;
    And when this we rightly know
    Through the world we safely go" Blake

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    how lovely.
    shh!!!
    the air and water have been here a long time, and they are telling stories.

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    In ancient landscapes
    Celebration could live well
    In citizens minds
    They drank with pleasure, adored
    Sensation, knew ways of love.

    Topic: Reflection
    Faith is believing what you know ain't so - Mark Twain

    The preachers deal with men of straw, as they are men of straw themselves - Henry David Thoreau

    The way to see faith is to shut the eye of reason - Benjamin Franklin

    The teaching of the church, theoretically astute, is a lie in practice and a compound of vulgar superstitions and sorcery - Leo Tolstoy

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    (I liked your tanka, AP. Do you think celebration does not live in deep in the soul anymore? Perhaps you are right. To much party on the surface- to little joy in celebration. Have you read the lyrics to An die freude?
    And thank you, Amuse. Glad you liked it.)

    Reflection:

    It brings the sky down
    this pond here in my garden
    mirror blue and white.
    Contemplating clouds in grass
    I reflect pond reflect sky.

    (Darn- miscalculated the second line. Changed it. Now it´s better.)


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    "Man was made for joy and woe;
    And when this we rightly know
    Through the world we safely go" Blake

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    A conversation
    between the computer screens.
    The distance cannot
    protect us from the anger
    that lures in our hearts and souls.

    (I am not talking about this forum)


    I am not sure if I am allowed to change topic, but I'll do it anyway. I know that I should do another tanka to the topic I said but I am too lazy for that.
    The reason why I changed topic is that I heard a song today. A really sad one.

    So the new topic is: "Dying language"
    Last edited by Taliesin; 08-12-2004 at 04:55 PM.
    If you believe even a half of this post, you are severely mistaken.

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    Kernow lost its tongue
    Some two centuries ago
    Singing sea shanties
    Voices from the harbour told
    Of a language they once lived

    Topic: Lourdes
    Faith is believing what you know ain't so - Mark Twain

    The preachers deal with men of straw, as they are men of straw themselves - Henry David Thoreau

    The way to see faith is to shut the eye of reason - Benjamin Franklin

    The teaching of the church, theoretically astute, is a lie in practice and a compound of vulgar superstitions and sorcery - Leo Tolstoy

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    Sixty-six they say
    The ‘authentic miracles’
    Performed at the shrine
    Millions have attended
    Might as well play lotteries

    Topic: sunshine
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    Faith is believing what you know ain't so - Mark Twain

    The preachers deal with men of straw, as they are men of straw themselves - Henry David Thoreau

    The way to see faith is to shut the eye of reason - Benjamin Franklin

    The teaching of the church, theoretically astute, is a lie in practice and a compound of vulgar superstitions and sorcery - Leo Tolstoy

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    The sun is shining
    Life forces its way through earth
    towards the divine light.
    In a few days all of it
    will be burnt and dead . Desert.


    Topic: temptation
    If you believe even a half of this post, you are severely mistaken.

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    My biology
    Says go for it, while you can!
    My psychology
    Agrees. My society
    Frowns. To whom should I listen?

    Topic: Perseverance
    Faith is believing what you know ain't so - Mark Twain

    The preachers deal with men of straw, as they are men of straw themselves - Henry David Thoreau

    The way to see faith is to shut the eye of reason - Benjamin Franklin

    The teaching of the church, theoretically astute, is a lie in practice and a compound of vulgar superstitions and sorcery - Leo Tolstoy

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    Perseverance

    I'll pick seeds today
    of plants that will be gone soon,
    as will I be gone.
    But my children's children shall
    plant them when there's peace in world.


    If you don't understand, then maybe you should know that native americans have collected seeds of plants that have died out by now so that when all this is over, they can start living normally again.

    New topic: Imagination
    If you believe even a half of this post, you are severely mistaken.

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    Away with the sword,
    the dragon, and the damsel
    Come away with me
    over seas of white and blue
    and mountains of candy cane

    next: hope
    "It all comes down to what we make of ourselves, eh?"
    -The Fairy Godmother

    "Sing on, poor souls! The night is short, and the morning will part you forever!"
    - Uncle Tom's Cabin

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