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    brilliant tall and proud
    half grown he chose the service
    for the name freedom

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    Smile

    Searching for Peace

    Are you sure you haven’t?
    Gentle Zephyr blowing by,
    Fragrance drifts near…

    Colors paint Sunset
    On idyllic autumn afternoons—
    Yet is this not peace?

    Birds singing chorus
    Insects and evening frogs join—
    Joyful noise resounds…

    Walk silent woodlands,
    See what noisy people miss—
    Chipmunk, lizard, deer…

    Heron stalking creek,
    Fox out hunting cottontails,
    Showy Orchis bloom…

    Down a trail waterfalls,
    Whispers secrets in the mist,
    Known to you alone…

    Tucked away, hid
    Now where few remember them
    Monoliths share thoughts…

    Sometimes forget where
    The beaten pathway takes you—
    Find peace on your own

    Pendragon
    © 5/29/07

    Dedicated to my friend, Uncle Lar. Best Wishes. Pen.

    Last edited by Pendragon; 05-29-2007 at 04:21 PM.
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Cool Thank You, Pendragon.

    Thank you, dear Sir, for
    Your kind words of Peace. I hope
    All is well with you.


    Sincerely,

    Uncle Lar

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    stepped on a penny
    was likely worth a million
    little did i know

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    falling petals drift
    languidly upon the wind
    direction no end

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    Pen got me to thinking so this is also for my friend Lar

    My friend, so you need
    comfort and encouragement
    Please take time to pray

    Worry swells within
    heart so heavy as to sink
    Unburden yourself

    Not a sparrow falls
    That goes unnoticed by Him
    Much greater are you

    When sorrow is great
    Rely more upon His strength
    Instead of your own

    I am so sorry
    That you have to suffer so
    But this will not last

    The climb to the top
    Takes so much effort and time
    There’s Glory up there

    But you must have peace
    Along your tedious climb
    Find the joy in Him

    Until you find peace
    you can count on your friends here
    To offer support

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    support got me to thinking

    My husband tells me,
    "Put on your big girl panties
    and just deal with it."

    Sympathetic man?
    I’ve never heard him called that.
    I’ll just deal with that.

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    I wasnt sure whether to post it in a different thread, ultimately decided to post it here anyway. This is close to a haiku but in a 5-7-7 syllable format.
    Post ur comments if u wish, but I already know that its *very* typical and stuff, just posting it because... as they say- "sharing is caring"!



    Trapped in time's trammel
    Fighting to be free I yell
    While the fears in me swell.

    I try not to care
    Try to overlook the fear
    Seeking relief everywhere.

    Time flies by, they say,
    The vexing pasts shooed away
    Leaving nothing on their way.

    So i shut my eyes
    Gulping the upsurge of sighs,
    Waiting for Phoebus to rise.


    Pretty banal, eh? Any suggestions?

    P.S. Oh and should I perhaps open a new thread for this? comments in here might hurt the main topic of this thread...
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    Quote Originally Posted by symphony View Post
    I wasnt sure whether to post it in a different thread, ultimately decided to post it here anyway. This is close to a haiku but in a 5-7-7 syllable format.
    Post ur comments if u wish, but I already know that its *very* typical and stuff, just posting it because... as they say- "sharing is caring"!



    Trapped in time's trammel
    Fighting to be free I yell
    While the fears in me swell.

    I try not to care
    Try to overlook the fear
    Seeking relief everywhere.

    Time flies by, they say,
    The vexing pasts shooed away
    Leaving nothing on their way.

    So i shut my eyes
    Gulping the upsurge of sighs,
    Waiting for Phoebus to rise.


    Pretty banal, eh? Any suggestions?

    P.S. Oh and should I perhaps open a new thread for this? comments in here might hurt the main topic of this thread...
    Your first line has 6 syllables. The nitpickers would say seven, because you used a contraction. Play with form all you wish. Invent a new form. Try winning the form poetry contest and then make us use that new form to write poetry! Someone years ago had to lay out the rules for haiku, tanka, cinquain, sonnet, etc. Good Luck!
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Healing

    support is never
    a harshly spoken language—
    soft words repel wrath…

    gentle like spring rain,
    not torrential downpour—
    that causes only flooding…

    when the tears won’t stop
    because of unmended wounds,
    first aid is required…

    rejection is fire
    burning fiercely out of hand
    love will find a way…

    © 5/30/07
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    big girl panties smile
    when no one is looking thru
    enchanting flowers

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    Cool Thank You, motherhubbard!

    Thank you for your words,
    Motherhubbard; I hope this
    Trial will end soon.

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    Cool

    Since Memorial
    Day Weekend happened, this week
    Will be very short!

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    blue is a color
    that brings so much to the pen
    writing continues

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    it is but a dream
    waiting patiently to rise
    from twilight slumber

    forms and figures pass
    wondering through paths unnamed
    spoken with sounds read

    allusions denied
    yesterdays and tomorrows
    designs thread as one

    consider the time
    of this days present moment
    create the vision

    together it comes
    all at once to know for sure
    its in his strong hands

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