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    Feral Prince

    Gray met gray on that misty morn
    On the embattled fields of Ocracoke isle
    As two Shetlands roamed their Shakleford Banks
    In the shadow of a Silver Lake.

    When Spirit joined in the famed Merlin
    The two made four and four made eight
    Till the salt earth quaked a hundred strong
    In the shadow of a Lookout Cape.

    But on that morn another mustang joined,
    A finer stallion with a swarthy mane
    A majestic steed that danced and preened
    A glorious gait untrained.

    He danced and preened like the Shadowfax King!
    Till the crowd arose with glee
    And Shackleford shook with astonished delight
    as Arod bowed graciously.

    For a brief moment in time
    it seemed his eye met mine,
    then he vanished as he came,
    And I thought “Tis right
    he’s left alone for such beauty
    remain best untamed.”

    On misty morns
    Remembrance reminds
    Of that place where
    The horses run free,
    Of this imperial prince’s
    Flaunty show prance,
    and I smile to myself gratefully.

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    I love it, Countess. It brings back such memories. Ocracoke isle, and Cape Hatteras is my favorite vacation spot, and I hope to be able to go again next year. It's like the edge of the Earth. I have a short story, currently under edit, about a ghostly encounter along the beach at Ocracoke isle with a certain pirate I am sure you could name.
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Blackbeard! Kewl!

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    I thought the imagery was lovely.

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    i really like this one. the writing is just great---and it has a fantasy feel to it. the meeting of the eyes and how the end is so resolved makes this a nostalgic tragedy for me! very very nice, countess.
    "He was nauseous with regret when he saw her face again, and when, as of yore, he pleaded and begged at her knees for the joy of her being. She understood Neal; she stroked his hair; she knew he was mad."
    ---Jack Kerouac, On The Road: The Original Scroll

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